There was once a forum with a user who, under a secret identity, came up with a melodramatic story outline and wrote a couple of chapters. But she only wrote the beginning, and seemed determined to let the ending drown in an abandoned project.
Feeling guilty about leaving her readers hanging, she revealed her true identity and handed the two-sentence outline to an unsuspecting fool, saying, “I’ve got faith in you, you can do it!” She told her to finish the story and not leave everyone hanging... And so the fool really did start writing.
That fool was me. ...
This story is the reason author Nanzhou came into being = =+++
The story below is the first one Nanzhou truly came up with herself...
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The last few chapters were not well written. The characters were so unlovable. The male and female protagonists are kind-hearted, but have awkward personalities and are a bit too kind.
In addition to Ying Shu, the supporting characters are all capricious villains, like the prince or Xie Yan. Their thoughts and actions change so fast. It's incredible. The author replies:
Hehe, this is a very immature piece of writing. Even the idea was thought up while writing. I'm sorry~~ The author's reply:
It turns out that I gave a score to each chapter, thank you~
Several of the chapters have received compliments, and they are some of the chapters that I am quite proud of, so I still love the descriptions of certain details.
From the beginning, this article was destined to be an ordinary article. The male and female protagonists had unremarkable characters and the plot was unremarkable. I have tried my best to grasp it. After all, the ideas of this novel, such as the meeting of men in disguise, the jealousy of the second male, the second female snatching the first male, the emperor granting a marriage, and the princess being imprisoned for resisting the marriage, were all thought up by the friends who originally wrote the novel. The characters at the beginning can no longer be changed. The protagonist can still be enriched through writing, but the supporting characters are somewhat unsatisfactory.
Only Ying Shu is a character that I added later. Maybe this is why I feel it is more consistent.
Haha, come to think of it, if I hadn't had the courage to take up this article and continue writing it, I might not have had the idea of writing a novel, nor would I have thought that I was capable of writing such a complete story, nor would my beloved Yue Jiang Yin have been born.
It's not Danmei →_→
After reading it, I feel that Su Ping and Yang Xin in the first three chapters are not the same person as those in the last three chapters. Especially the princess, based on the description of her appearance, and later the description of Xie Yan, I felt that she was a woman who was capable of literary and military skills, quite experienced, free and easy, and unconventional. When she changed into women's clothes later, she seemed to be a completely different person. She had no elegance at the beginning. Instead, she seemed very restrained and impulsive. She was also emotionally entangled, and she also liked to get involved in business. Or maybe I thought of Pingyao when I saw Xi Wu and how she rode her horse at the beginning, thinking she would be a cheerful woman like Pingyao... But later...
As for Su Ping, because I saw Nanzhou mention it before, Qianjiangyuexiaqu planned to have the protagonist taken in by a hostile prince, so I thought of Yan'er as soon as I saw the male protagonist playing the piano, and his unwillingness to reveal his inner feelings also reminded me of Yan'er. But when we turn to the second chapter, we find a difference. Yan'er doesn't want to reveal his inner thoughts because of his vigilance on the battlefield, while Su Ping is aloof and bookish. Because of this, the way he acts after entering the court always feels incompatible with him at the beginning, but people will also change due to the environment. But what exactly he wants to do and what his goal is is still not so clear. Could it be that his goal is to run a school and become a private school teacher? But compared to the princess, he is less inconsistent. This character is probably not as ambitious as Zhao Yan, who only wants to live in the world forever.
In addition, I must say that this prince is really annoying. At first he thought he had a gentle temperament, but then he brought a group of people to serve him drinks after some ministers nagged him about killing Su Ping. He had no independent opinions and was far worse than Yuanyuan.
There is also Ying Shu, a very cute subordinate who is arguing with his superiors. When I think of Ping Chao, I have the impression that the other four people are all calm people on the surface. There are also a bunch of subordinates in Jiangyuan who are young and old but pretend to be mature. Ping Chao's poisonous tongue is really unique among them.
After watching Yue Jiang Yin, I actually wished that Yang Xin was a man. Isn't it a little abnormal for me?
It's a bit watery, but the writing is really good.
I'm shocked! ! ! !
Is it female or male? ?
If it's a woman, I won't watch it.
Watch this one after watching Over the River Yin. . . I couldn't help but put characters into it.
The prince and the champion, hope to see the end one day
BLBLBL, the royal way!
Come on! Send flowers...
I was impatient to wait for the article, so I read the big one.
Did Dada take over the writing after Chapter 7?
The second half has the shadow of "Crossing the River".
Even the male protagonist has the prototype of Zhao Yan.
The first article was okay (I almost didn't want to read the first half).
The second piece "Yin across the River" is already amazingly talented.
Looking forward to the next article.
Or BL. Much more attractive.
I came here from Yuejiang. The writing is very good and lifelike.
The last few chapters were not well written. The characters were so unlovable. The male and female protagonists are kind-hearted, but have awkward personalities and are a bit too kind. In addition to Ying Shu, the supporting characters are all capricious villains, like the prince or Xie Yan. Their thoughts and actions change so fast. It's incredible. The author replies: Hehe, this is a very immature piece of writing. Even the idea was thought up while writing. I'm sorry~~ The author's reply: It turns out that I gave a score to each chapter, thank you~ Several of the chapters have received compliments, and they are some of the chapters that I am quite proud of, so I still love the descriptions of certain details. From the beginning, this article was destined to be an ordinary article. The male and female protagonists had unremarkable characters and the plot was unremarkable. I have tried my best to grasp it. After all, the ideas of this novel, such as the meeting of men in disguise, the jealousy of the second male, the second female snatching the first male, the emperor granting a marriage, and the princess being imprisoned for resisting the marriage, were all thought up by the friends who originally wrote the novel. The characters at the beginning can no longer be changed. The protagonist can still be enriched through writing, but the supporting characters are somewhat unsatisfactory. Only Ying Shu is a character that I added later. Maybe this is why I feel it is more consistent. Haha, come to think of it, if I hadn't had the courage to take up this article and continue writing it, I might not have had the idea of writing a novel, nor would I have thought that I was capable of writing such a complete story, nor would my beloved Yue Jiang Yin have been born.
It's not Danmei →_→
After reading it, I feel that Su Ping and Yang Xin in the first three chapters are not the same person as those in the last three chapters. Especially the princess, based on the description of her appearance, and later the description of Xie Yan, I felt that she was a woman who was capable of literary and military skills, quite experienced, free and easy, and unconventional. When she changed into women's clothes later, she seemed to be a completely different person. She had no elegance at the beginning. Instead, she seemed very restrained and impulsive. She was also emotionally entangled, and she also liked to get involved in business. Or maybe I thought of Pingyao when I saw Xi Wu and how she rode her horse at the beginning, thinking she would be a cheerful woman like Pingyao... But later... As for Su Ping, because I saw Nanzhou mention it before, Qianjiangyuexiaqu planned to have the protagonist taken in by a hostile prince, so I thought of Yan'er as soon as I saw the male protagonist playing the piano, and his unwillingness to reveal his inner feelings also reminded me of Yan'er. But when we turn to the second chapter, we find a difference. Yan'er doesn't want to reveal his inner thoughts because of his vigilance on the battlefield, while Su Ping is aloof and bookish. Because of this, the way he acts after entering the court always feels incompatible with him at the beginning, but people will also change due to the environment. But what exactly he wants to do and what his goal is is still not so clear. Could it be that his goal is to run a school and become a private school teacher? But compared to the princess, he is less inconsistent. This character is probably not as ambitious as Zhao Yan, who only wants to live in the world forever. In addition, I must say that this prince is really annoying. At first he thought he had a gentle temperament, but then he brought a group of people to serve him drinks after some ministers nagged him about killing Su Ping. He had no independent opinions and was far worse than Yuanyuan. There is also Ying Shu, a very cute subordinate who is arguing with his superiors. When I think of Ping Chao, I have the impression that the other four people are all calm people on the surface. There are also a bunch of subordinates in Jiangyuan who are young and old but pretend to be mature. Ping Chao's poisonous tongue is really unique among them.
After watching Yue Jiang Yin, I actually wished that Yang Xin was a man. Isn't it a little abnormal for me?
It's a bit watery, but the writing is really good.
I'm shocked! ! ! ! Is it female or male? ? If it's a woman, I won't watch it.
Watch this one after watching Over the River Yin. . . I couldn't help but put characters into it. The prince and the champion, hope to see the end one day BLBLBL, the royal way!
Come on! Send flowers...
I was impatient to wait for the article, so I read the big one. Did Dada take over the writing after Chapter 7? The second half has the shadow of "Crossing the River". Even the male protagonist has the prototype of Zhao Yan. The first article was okay (I almost didn't want to read the first half). The second piece "Yin across the River" is already amazingly talented. Looking forward to the next article. Or BL. Much more attractive.
I came here from Yuejiang. The writing is very good and lifelike.