[Hunter X Hunter Fanfiction] Dancing Lightly on the Water

The writing is a little messy, and the heroine is a little arrogant.

~~O(>_<)o ~~I burst into tears... I still want to watch it!!

The writing style is a bit immature, the content needs to be strengthened, and there are a lot of typos, but overall it's okay, keep going...

Write it, I think the writing is good

To be honest, I can't understand it and the content is not substantial.

Wow~~~Your father is so cruel. . . I sympathize. . . However, the writing is good, keep up the hard work

I think Xiao Yi's scenes are very few.

In fact, you can still make money by marrying him without giving it away, right??

??? What's the last thing???

Pack up the bird and take it away