Return of the Soul (Matriarchal World)

It feels so uncomfortable to stand on the wrong CP

Finally finished reading it To be honest, the story is actually pretty good, but the later stages are a bit bloody. In fact, it would be nice if the story ended when Mo Sheng died. And I am already impressed that I was able to finish writing it. However, in terms of the description method, the main line is not clear at the beginning, and it is a bit confusing to interject narration from time to time. The Mo Sheng line has a lot of suspense settings, and the time line keeps interjecting narratives, causing a bit of confusion in the early stage. Also, later in the writing I realized that you had forgotten about Murong Su, let alone Murong Fei who appeared at the beginning. Also, I remember that there was some kind of master who delivered the news, saying that he had given the protagonist news and wanted to ask her for the most important thing. This foreshadowing later came to nothing. There are many things that have not been explained clearly. For example, in the end, the protagonist is resurrected. How he is resurrected and who promised him twenty years are not clearly explained. If it is not explained clearly, it seems very profound, but in fact it is full of funnels and I don't know how to justify it. There was a period of time in the middle period when the title of the protagonist alternated from "Xuanyuan Yao" to "Dugu Xiao". For example, when going to the imperial mausoleum, at first it was said to be the tomb of the Xuanyuan royal family, but later it was said that "Dugu Xiao's father and concubine" were buried inside. Now there is an ambiguity, "Dugu Xiao's father and concubine." So could the corpse in this imperial mausoleum be that of Dugu Xiao's father and concubine? Also, the so-called "female queen" is not like this. In this article, there is no problem even if the genders of men and women are swapped. How strong a woman must be to be able to hold such a weak man in her arms countless times = =What a big-handed male protagonist. . . . "A big hand", are you sure you are describing a woman? Or is it the femininity society you constructed, where women are as rough and arrogant as men, and men are as short and weak as women? Even their physical characteristics have been completely changed. So are men still men and women still women? = =. . . . . I'm not here to criticize the author, but I'm just looking forward to your progress.

So... The actual age is that the prince is in his teens and Asheng is forty-one...

=0=I traveled back in time...

I like this later Mo Sheng. Although I don't know his real name, he is very brave and persistent in the writing. His love is as vivid as his hate. I lost my two children and my loved one. It's so pitiful to die like this.

Congratulations on the completion. But. . Well, I still don't understand why he is called "Father-in-law". . Ha ha

Sprinkle flowers~! Take care of yourself~

Sprinkle flowers. I'm reading all three of your female heroes! Like!

Is it the end? Don't be a tragedy!!!!!!

I always feel that Mo Sheng is more like the male protagonist, he is too miserable. In fact, he has always been good, obviously he works so hard... I really cried for him~