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It's finished, but I'm really sad because I had to wrap it up in a rush...
I'm sorry, everyone~~o(>_
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Welcome back the author. Also, shouldn't you use a mirror or a hoe to dig soil?
Is this going to be a trap? There has been no update for so many days.
After grabbing the sofa, I will try to write more =. =
In fact, I wasn't very interested in novels about cultivating immortality or cultivating the truth before. One of the reasons is that most of the writers writing these are male writers, and they are inevitably studs. So I was somewhat repulsed by them in my heart. Secondly, even if there are female authors, at least most of the ones I have read are about love taking up most of the story. When I was young, I was quite happy to watch them, but now that I am older, they feel boring and crooked.
Then, for some reason, I read a few articles about practicing this and that, and then I discovered something very interesting.
If we want to use an analogy, then when men write, most of them focus on the senses, just like a big piece of meat or a big bowl of wine, which first satisfies desires and makes them feel happy. But girls write more delicately, slowly and methodically, and moisturize things silently, as if they are telling a story.
When I read those books, what impressed me most was the writers' descriptions of the mouth and waist - -.
Okay, actually I want to complain - -.
Why do they always use "red lips" when writing lips? Whether it's pure, coquettish, innocent or sexy, they always have red lips - -. Red lips - -. I always think of a pale face and those bright red lips - -. So scary ><.
Next is the waist - -.
Shenma is soft and elastic - -. Brother, your girl is made of rubber. #55 Every time I see this description, I have the illusion that I want to break the girl hard, and then let go and make a "boom" sound. In fact, it is quite like a spring.
Okay, okay, stop it now.
Of course, things written by male writers naturally have their own advantages. The pace is tight and the timeline is relatively long. Generally speaking, anything spanning ten or eight years will be fine, and there should be some longer. Therefore, when watching, we feel that we can grow with the protagonist. Of course, it may also be because the timeline is stretched too long. Sometimes, it seems a little delayed in some places, and it is inevitably a bit boring. At least sometimes I can't help but skip and watch, because I can roughly know the growth pattern of the protagonist, and I can guess it with my eyes closed - -.
Of course, when girls write, they pay more attention to details. Every look and every movement is observed meticulously. Of course, it is because of this meticulousness that it is always easy to skip over the general time.
Of course, love still occupies the main mode - -. In fact, you are just a love story disguised as X/X - -.
Above!
After talking a lot of nonsense, I finally got back to where I started.
What can I say, Shanzhu, I really like your writing ><. The atmosphere is delicate, plain and natural. I don't want to be like other articles, where a beautiful man appears in three steps and then gets entangled with him again and again.
It doesn't just focus on A Yue, it also allows us to see Qin Xiu's growth. Although I wish to see her every day><.
Well, actually, I really don't care about the male protagonist issue, because I think it's okay if there is no male protagonist, because in this article, whether it's A Yue or others, they are all very brilliant, each with their own characteristics, which is unforgettable. (I also like Luisa><.) However, I still can't help but ask, is there a male protagonist in this article?
Although I think Qin Xiu can be regarded as the male protagonist, this protagonist is not the other protagonist =. =What I'm asking is, is there a guy who is A Yue's leading actor?
Shanzhu, you should continue to work hard and write, I am still looking forward to it... QAQ.
This younger brother is so bad. He has no brotherly love and is so conceited and selfish!
The midterm exam was amazing. . . I still have to memorize it, but I won't give up reading! Claw!
Sofa, sofa... As expected, cultivators can't have too much attachment to the mortal world, and Ashiu was trapped...
Han... I was wrong. I promise not to be a tyrant in the future... I will rate each chapter obediently - -|||. So, dear, please update more, I can't get enough of it...
That... Well, actually I am biased... I am towards Qin Xiu... And now Isaac is more likely to enter a state of obsession=. =Little fruit, you are about to grow crooked- -. Hurry up and let Ah Yue correct it for you...
Let me express this again, Ah Yue, I like you >\\\\<. I don't care that you are a woman, just don't dislike me for being a woman too...
~Sahua~ I hate the school's poor internet speed and my penis's constant twitching
Still haven't seen enough, please update ><.
The update is too slow~~~~~I can't keep up with my emotions after reading it~~~I strongly request daily updates
Welcome back the author. Also, shouldn't you use a mirror or a hoe to dig soil?
Is this going to be a trap? There has been no update for so many days.
After grabbing the sofa, I will try to write more =. = In fact, I wasn't very interested in novels about cultivating immortality or cultivating the truth before. One of the reasons is that most of the writers writing these are male writers, and they are inevitably studs. So I was somewhat repulsed by them in my heart. Secondly, even if there are female authors, at least most of the ones I have read are about love taking up most of the story. When I was young, I was quite happy to watch them, but now that I am older, they feel boring and crooked. Then, for some reason, I read a few articles about practicing this and that, and then I discovered something very interesting. If we want to use an analogy, then when men write, most of them focus on the senses, just like a big piece of meat or a big bowl of wine, which first satisfies desires and makes them feel happy. But girls write more delicately, slowly and methodically, and moisturize things silently, as if they are telling a story. When I read those books, what impressed me most was the writers' descriptions of the mouth and waist - -. Okay, actually I want to complain - -. Why do they always use "red lips" when writing lips? Whether it's pure, coquettish, innocent or sexy, they always have red lips - -. Red lips - -. I always think of a pale face and those bright red lips - -. So scary ><. Next is the waist - -. Shenma is soft and elastic - -. Brother, your girl is made of rubber. #55 Every time I see this description, I have the illusion that I want to break the girl hard, and then let go and make a "boom" sound. In fact, it is quite like a spring. Okay, okay, stop it now. Of course, things written by male writers naturally have their own advantages. The pace is tight and the timeline is relatively long. Generally speaking, anything spanning ten or eight years will be fine, and there should be some longer. Therefore, when watching, we feel that we can grow with the protagonist. Of course, it may also be because the timeline is stretched too long. Sometimes, it seems a little delayed in some places, and it is inevitably a bit boring. At least sometimes I can't help but skip and watch, because I can roughly know the growth pattern of the protagonist, and I can guess it with my eyes closed - -. Of course, when girls write, they pay more attention to details. Every look and every movement is observed meticulously. Of course, it is because of this meticulousness that it is always easy to skip over the general time. Of course, love still occupies the main mode - -. In fact, you are just a love story disguised as X/X - -. Above! After talking a lot of nonsense, I finally got back to where I started. What can I say, Shanzhu, I really like your writing ><. The atmosphere is delicate, plain and natural. I don't want to be like other articles, where a beautiful man appears in three steps and then gets entangled with him again and again. It doesn't just focus on A Yue, it also allows us to see Qin Xiu's growth. Although I wish to see her every day><. Well, actually, I really don't care about the male protagonist issue, because I think it's okay if there is no male protagonist, because in this article, whether it's A Yue or others, they are all very brilliant, each with their own characteristics, which is unforgettable. (I also like Luisa><.) However, I still can't help but ask, is there a male protagonist in this article? Although I think Qin Xiu can be regarded as the male protagonist, this protagonist is not the other protagonist =. =What I'm asking is, is there a guy who is A Yue's leading actor? Shanzhu, you should continue to work hard and write, I am still looking forward to it... QAQ.
This younger brother is so bad. He has no brotherly love and is so conceited and selfish!
The midterm exam was amazing. . . I still have to memorize it, but I won't give up reading! Claw!
Sofa, sofa... As expected, cultivators can't have too much attachment to the mortal world, and Ashiu was trapped...
Han... I was wrong. I promise not to be a tyrant in the future... I will rate each chapter obediently - -|||. So, dear, please update more, I can't get enough of it... That... Well, actually I am biased... I am towards Qin Xiu... And now Isaac is more likely to enter a state of obsession=. =Little fruit, you are about to grow crooked- -. Hurry up and let Ah Yue correct it for you... Let me express this again, Ah Yue, I like you >\\\\<. I don't care that you are a woman, just don't dislike me for being a woman too...
~Sahua~ I hate the school's poor internet speed and my penis's constant twitching
Still haven't seen enough, please update ><.
The update is too slow~~~~~I can't keep up with my emotions after reading it~~~I strongly request daily updates