A Jieya and An Qieliya are princesses of two different countries.
One is clever from childhood, with a far-reaching reputation for her beauty and intelligence; the other is so wild-tempered that nearly everyone knows of her.
A mistaken marriage contract sends them both fleeing the palace and running away from home.
This unexpected turn of events also gives them the chance to meet and get to know each other.
And so the story begins...
The blurb has been changed to a concise version. For the old blurb (the story's background), click here O(∩_∩)O~
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Premise:
It feels like a light novel, very good, but the characters are not very emotional.
It's a little jumpy, but overall it's very good~ Keep up the good work~
Oh ~ fateful encounter ~
Damn, you can't find any new articles... ORZ
The princess is the most loving, spreading flowers
You're good at painting, hehe, come on
Well, it took me so long to see this article because I haven't been online. First of all, I would like to say sorry to the author.
I saw the girl's article saying that it was her appetite for my concubine. I'm really sorry if my request to receive the article has caused the girl such a misunderstanding, but I want to say that your article is not to my liking at all. So below I will mainly talk about the reasons why I feel that I am not to my taste. This is just a family opinion, so please understand if there is any bias. .
First of all, girl, what's your title? As a two-dimensional person, I have to say that when I saw your title, I immediately thought of a certain comic. Yes, maybe it's a bit unpopular (actually it's not very unpopular), but at least I think it's best to go to Baidu to search for this topic before choosing the title of the article. A title that reminds people of something other than the article is always not worth advocating. It will have an impact on the promotion of the article and the readers' positioning of the article. Moreover, this topic is a bit too cutesy, so I suggest changing it.
Next is the copywriting. The girl seems to have made a mistake, that is, the copywriting is used to summarize and refine the full text and give the author a preliminary impression of the article, rather than to supplement the full text. In fact, some people, such as I, habitually do not read copywriting. So, girl, your setting of "MINA needs to read the copy before you know what I am writing about~" is really annoying. Not to mention that your copywriting actually makes people look uncomfortable, it is too crowded and the logic is not very clear. At least I thought about it for a long time before I roughly understood the relationship between the characters. I hope it can be sorted out and concise.
Finally, let me mention the text. I haven't read much of the main text, so I'll only mention a rough impression here. The classification of this girl's article should be regarded as fantasy, but I have to say that it is not called fantasy just by changing some foreign names and adding a few knights and princesses. When I saw the Adventurer's Guild, my anus tightened again... Don't write a fantasy that is so like a game. Too many people have been poisoned by this model. What is the meaning of fantasy? I can't summarize it well. Maybe you think it's just a cute thing to earn some clicks. But in fact, I still want to say that for a small fantasy, you don't have the fantasy of that world in your heart. You will always just follow the same fixed pattern. And too many people have done this kind of thing. If you do it again, you will naturally not be able to attract people. The Lord of the Rings, Ice and Fire HP is a masterpiece because he wrote several majestic books and created that world. It highlights the greatness that small people can create in a magnificent background. As for the Japanese series, what is the basis for the success of Japanese cute comics? It relies on cute images and otaku. And words can't convey that cuteness, and your writing skills can't convey it even more. Your audience is not otakus, so how can you expect to catch eyeballs with such a cute Japanese character setting. Most of those who know how to play Touhou are otakus. How many girls are willing to watch Touhou fanfics? .
To take a step back, even if you just want to write and write, and it has nothing to do with anything else, I also think that your writing skills are really ordinary. It will make people think that the author is not very skilled, which will directly affect other people's initial impression. Before they read further, they will feel that there is no good story. And there is no other way to do this except to watch more and practice more. In addition, girl, please be sure to set up a FEEL opening. Your opening is so boring that I dare not look at it = =.
That's it for now. The original intention of the complaint is to hope that the girl can get better and better. Please be sure to work hard and laugh.
The new chapter has been updated. It took a lot of effort to pop it out and then retract it... How miserable I am... (Circle
The cover is from p station...
This cover looks like "Idol Master 2011"
It feels like a light novel, very good, but the characters are not very emotional.
It's a little jumpy, but overall it's very good~ Keep up the good work~
Oh ~ fateful encounter ~
Damn, you can't find any new articles... ORZ
The princess is the most loving, spreading flowers
You're good at painting, hehe, come on
Well, it took me so long to see this article because I haven't been online. First of all, I would like to say sorry to the author. I saw the girl's article saying that it was her appetite for my concubine. I'm really sorry if my request to receive the article has caused the girl such a misunderstanding, but I want to say that your article is not to my liking at all. So below I will mainly talk about the reasons why I feel that I am not to my taste. This is just a family opinion, so please understand if there is any bias. . First of all, girl, what's your title? As a two-dimensional person, I have to say that when I saw your title, I immediately thought of a certain comic. Yes, maybe it's a bit unpopular (actually it's not very unpopular), but at least I think it's best to go to Baidu to search for this topic before choosing the title of the article. A title that reminds people of something other than the article is always not worth advocating. It will have an impact on the promotion of the article and the readers' positioning of the article. Moreover, this topic is a bit too cutesy, so I suggest changing it. Next is the copywriting. The girl seems to have made a mistake, that is, the copywriting is used to summarize and refine the full text and give the author a preliminary impression of the article, rather than to supplement the full text. In fact, some people, such as I, habitually do not read copywriting. So, girl, your setting of "MINA needs to read the copy before you know what I am writing about~" is really annoying. Not to mention that your copywriting actually makes people look uncomfortable, it is too crowded and the logic is not very clear. At least I thought about it for a long time before I roughly understood the relationship between the characters. I hope it can be sorted out and concise. Finally, let me mention the text. I haven't read much of the main text, so I'll only mention a rough impression here. The classification of this girl's article should be regarded as fantasy, but I have to say that it is not called fantasy just by changing some foreign names and adding a few knights and princesses. When I saw the Adventurer's Guild, my anus tightened again... Don't write a fantasy that is so like a game. Too many people have been poisoned by this model. What is the meaning of fantasy? I can't summarize it well. Maybe you think it's just a cute thing to earn some clicks. But in fact, I still want to say that for a small fantasy, you don't have the fantasy of that world in your heart. You will always just follow the same fixed pattern. And too many people have done this kind of thing. If you do it again, you will naturally not be able to attract people. The Lord of the Rings, Ice and Fire HP is a masterpiece because he wrote several majestic books and created that world. It highlights the greatness that small people can create in a magnificent background. As for the Japanese series, what is the basis for the success of Japanese cute comics? It relies on cute images and otaku. And words can't convey that cuteness, and your writing skills can't convey it even more. Your audience is not otakus, so how can you expect to catch eyeballs with such a cute Japanese character setting. Most of those who know how to play Touhou are otakus. How many girls are willing to watch Touhou fanfics? . To take a step back, even if you just want to write and write, and it has nothing to do with anything else, I also think that your writing skills are really ordinary. It will make people think that the author is not very skilled, which will directly affect other people's initial impression. Before they read further, they will feel that there is no good story. And there is no other way to do this except to watch more and practice more. In addition, girl, please be sure to set up a FEEL opening. Your opening is so boring that I dare not look at it = =. That's it for now. The original intention of the complaint is to hope that the girl can get better and better. Please be sure to work hard and laugh.
The new chapter has been updated. It took a lot of effort to pop it out and then retract it... How miserable I am... (Circle