Grapes on the Vines, Flowers in the Tower (Lu Xiaofeng Fanfic)

Ah, I'm speechless, I can't stand it anymore, it's too humble, it's too humble, you might as well be a native like this, a girl in the 21st century seems like an ancient torture novel

I think it's quite disgusting. Why do you have to go through a relationship before choosing Grape that is always by your side? What a scumbag! ! ! The heroine also puts herself too low! ! To be honest, this article makes me hate Hua Man Lou even more! After all, the man who can fall in love with Shangguan Feiyan has really bad taste.

A building full of flowers, a grape trellis in the backyard, the young man in the flower building has a secret fragrance on his sleeves, and the girl under the grape trellis is sour and sweet. When he and she first met, they didn't know each other, but they were blind against each other; after traveling through time and space, she became his maid, and he realized her persistence and stubbornness; as they spent time together day and night, he realized her naivety and carefulness; when they were robbed, he realized her agility and courage; when he encountered eye problems, he realized her sensitivity and tenacity... Although she is just a maid, the young master is soft-hearted and kind-hearted. He would make an exception and take her to Baihualou, he would hand her a bag of silver while shopping, he would carefully choose a hairpin for her, he would protect her in front of outsiders... When he did not feel love for her, he was as kind to her as a brother to a sister; When he couldn't figure out his feelings for her, he didn't want to wrong her because of his previous feelings for Shangguan Feiyan. He would rather be confused than to sort things out, but he didn't know that his true feelings had already been exposed. When he fell in love with her, he promised that she would be his only wife. The story is not long and thrilling, but as the story unfolds, the building filled with flowers and the grape trellis become increasingly clear and vivid. As the book says, a man may meet many women in his life, but only one will make him want to marry her. Shangguan Feiyan, the flower-filled first love, is heart-wrenching with her beauty, captivating with her intelligence, and frightening with her palace. She is a woman who is not easy to settle down; but Putao is different, she has no soul-stirring She is beautiful, and has no scheming ideas. She is very ordinary, but she is cunning even when she is silent, and she is courageous when faced with a crisis. As a maid, she has a measure of progress and retreat. As a woman, she can be stable and bring warmth to others. Hua Man Lou is an incredibly warm person, but he is also blind. Such Hua Man Lou generously brings warmth to others without asking for anything in return, but he also needs stability and warmth. Putao is just such a woman. Her beauty is not overt, but it can make people feel extra at ease. After reading the whole article, I really feel like a flower in the south of the Yangtze River, the peaceful and exquisite beauty of the small bridges and flowing water of the people. Occasionally, I can't help but smile. Although the artistic conception is there, the story is complete, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is wonderful, I hope the author will pay attention to the following points: First, there is the issue of length. The article starts from the case of Jile Tower and covers a wide span until before and after the decisive battle, but it only takes about 100,000 words to finish. It has to be said that the plot is a bit ambiguous and many details cannot be dealt with. If there were no plot hints from the original work, it would be very difficult to read in many places. Moreover, the later stage may be related to the author's physical condition, and the uncertainty of the update is secondary. The key is that the ending is too hasty, and there are many jerky transitions. Secondly, there is the issue of description. This article is a fanfic, and the fanfic is based on the original work, but it cannot be denied that the fanfic is also a second creation, and since it is a creation, there must be no less. After reading the whole article, there are too few descriptions of the characters' appearance and clothing, which made the author, a guy who controls appearance and screen control, extremely crazy. Another, and most important point, is the emotional description of the male and female protagonists. The relationship between the two started at a young age, heated up in life, and was awakened by changes. It seems that it is indeed all right, but the grasp of the subtleties is still missing. It also has something to do with the ending being too hasty. For example, Hua Manlou struggled with his feelings for Tao Tao until he finally fell in love. This process should have captured people's hearts thousands of times, but as the author read it, it couldn't help but be dull. Also, this is a fanfic of Hua Man Lou. I suggest that the author should add more descriptions of Hua Man Lou. It's not enough to read╮(╯▽╰)╭ Generally speaking, the story begins in Jile Tower, ends before and after the decisive battle, and extends to the Western Regions. As a fanfic of Hua Man Lou, the author leads the readers to relive old dreams, adds the original heroine Ye Putao, and makes up for the readers' regrets. After all, Hua Man Lou has a happy and peaceful life.

It's a very warm article~ Although it may be a little sad sometimes, but it's more warm! Very well written! This is what my ideal life should be like!

Grape must be pretending, right? Maybe it's because he doesn't want Hua Qishao to recognize him for some reason~~ It's almost over, but I still feel reluctant to let go of such lovely Grape and gentle Qi Shao Ah!!>< Forget it, I will definitely continue to follow Lijiu's next article~~

Pack it up, it turns out the two of them have known each other for a long time!

As for the names of Ximen Chuixue's son and daughter, they haven't made it clear what's going on? I'm confused!

Why did the emperor want to marry her daughter?

Phew~the little buns are so cute~~>^<

Lu Renjia = Passerby A Lu Xiaofeng's daughter is actually called Passerby A (her father is not considered a Passerby A person anywhere). Is this Lu Xiaofeng's new life expectation?