Chu Tianyun returned to the capital she'd been away from for so long, carrying the dream of bringing honor to her family and earning a place in history. In the end, she got everything she wanted. It sounds like a happy story, doesn't it?
No transmigration. Male pregnancy.
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It's been five years, and I still take a look at it from time to time.
I have to nurture it until it is finished and then I can watch it. Except for the name, the plot of the new version and the old version have basically been straightened out, and they are not as cute as the old version.
I have to nurture it until it is finished and then I can watch it. Except for the name, the plot of the new version and the old version have basically been straightened out, and they are not as cute as the old version.
Is this editing or something? I feel cheated!
Why are you going to ask for praise for such a lazy ass?
It's great to have something to watch in the New Year! Happy New Year, hmm!
Did Xiao Xue's daughter survive this time?
Please update!!!! T^T
Wu Tai, please don't blame me for telling the truth. After reading these two chapters, I thought it was better to start like the previous version. Starting the article directly from this part, and writing about the first meeting between Xue Jun and Tianyun, I really don't feel that much! And I'm really worried that you have changed some of the unforgettable plots that I couldn't bear to read. For example, Xiao Chu's first case, Xiao Xue and Xiao Chu's first love affair, and the later love story between the two Yu Yan, these are all things that deeply attracted me and moved me. Wu Taida said that the original version had too many idle strokes and wanted to change the rhythm to be more compact. However, as far as my impression is concerned, I feel that there was no idle strokes before. Moreover, the article was originally designed to be relaxed and the pace could not be tight all the time. You should take leisure time when you have time~~~ I am really afraid that Taida will be too demanding on myself, and changing it over and over will be counterproductive (the most failed example of writing among writers is probably Mr. Jin Yong), in fact, as a reader, you probably shouldn't influence the author too much. After all, writing is a very subjective and personal matter in some aspects. But since Wu Tai is willing to post the article on the Internet, he should still hope to hear some thoughts or opinions from readers, so I took the liberty to express my feelings. If I offend anything, please forgive me. Of course, I have only read two chapters now. It may be too early to say that the new version is not as good as the old version. If possible, could you send me the old and new versions at once so that I can make a comprehensive comparison?
Finally, to catch a bug, "Snake, Snake, Scorpion, and Scorpion repeatedly confirmed that Bixiao was okay and took Shen Xing alone." What does "Snake, Snake, Scorpion, and Scorpion" mean in this place? Is it a typo? "The one that moves from the right to the left is a bit annoying if it is dangling in front of my eyes." There is a missing word "you" in front of the braille.
By the way, Dad, since half of the story content has been changed, but I still have some unforgettable feelings about the old version, so Wu Tai, could you just open a new pit and retain the content of this old pit? It can also be regarded as a kind of commemoration. You can take a look at the original idea in the future, and then I, the reader, can come back at some point to reminisce about the original surprise of the article and my feelings about it.
It's been five years, and I still take a look at it from time to time.
I have to nurture it until it is finished and then I can watch it. Except for the name, the plot of the new version and the old version have basically been straightened out, and they are not as cute as the old version.
I have to nurture it until it is finished and then I can watch it. Except for the name, the plot of the new version and the old version have basically been straightened out, and they are not as cute as the old version.
Is this editing or something? I feel cheated!
Why are you going to ask for praise for such a lazy ass?
It's great to have something to watch in the New Year! Happy New Year, hmm!
Did Xiao Xue's daughter survive this time?
Please update!!!! T^T
Wu Tai, please don't blame me for telling the truth. After reading these two chapters, I thought it was better to start like the previous version. Starting the article directly from this part, and writing about the first meeting between Xue Jun and Tianyun, I really don't feel that much! And I'm really worried that you have changed some of the unforgettable plots that I couldn't bear to read. For example, Xiao Chu's first case, Xiao Xue and Xiao Chu's first love affair, and the later love story between the two Yu Yan, these are all things that deeply attracted me and moved me. Wu Taida said that the original version had too many idle strokes and wanted to change the rhythm to be more compact. However, as far as my impression is concerned, I feel that there was no idle strokes before. Moreover, the article was originally designed to be relaxed and the pace could not be tight all the time. You should take leisure time when you have time~~~ I am really afraid that Taida will be too demanding on myself, and changing it over and over will be counterproductive (the most failed example of writing among writers is probably Mr. Jin Yong), in fact, as a reader, you probably shouldn't influence the author too much. After all, writing is a very subjective and personal matter in some aspects. But since Wu Tai is willing to post the article on the Internet, he should still hope to hear some thoughts or opinions from readers, so I took the liberty to express my feelings. If I offend anything, please forgive me. Of course, I have only read two chapters now. It may be too early to say that the new version is not as good as the old version. If possible, could you send me the old and new versions at once so that I can make a comprehensive comparison? Finally, to catch a bug, "Snake, Snake, Scorpion, and Scorpion repeatedly confirmed that Bixiao was okay and took Shen Xing alone." What does "Snake, Snake, Scorpion, and Scorpion" mean in this place? Is it a typo? "The one that moves from the right to the left is a bit annoying if it is dangling in front of my eyes." There is a missing word "you" in front of the braille.
By the way, Dad, since half of the story content has been changed, but I still have some unforgettable feelings about the old version, so Wu Tai, could you just open a new pit and retain the content of this old pit? It can also be regarded as a kind of commemoration. You can take a look at the original idea in the future, and then I, the reader, can come back at some point to reminisce about the original surprise of the article and my feelings about it.