Prologue: Introduces the world of You Lai Hong Mian, its characters, locations, and opposing organizations.
First Show of Strength: There are a few fight scenes to keep everyone from getting bored. The real action comes later. For now, I'll plant some clues so readers know I'm not just writing a prologue.
School: More or less like the prologue.
A Bright Beginning: Some of this is also like a prologue. I've played eight classic online games, each for more than half a year. I want to combine those eight games to create a long fantasy novel, so there's a lot that needs explaining at the start. This book has a very broad scope. You could say my imagination runs wild. The story gets more and more exciting as it goes on. Some parts of this novel are also open to your own interpretation. The plot may be good, even if my writing isn't. I hope more readers will encourage me. I know this book can't compare to some classic novels, but I believe that if you keep reading, I'll let you experience the thrill I felt when I played those games.
Tears are streaming down my face, why do I think this is a divine text [more serious face]
I'm crying. Are you a settings control?
When Xiaochun ran out, Yaoyue shouted to him: "Think carefully about the country. I hope we will be friends in the future. Not enemies. My country is: Paul Huige Empire. My name is also Yaoyue." Well, I was a little shocked, a 7-year-old child...
"Of course I support it. Dad will give you 1,000 yuan for your monthly living expenses." Children in this era are really rich.
The 7-year-old's innocent smile made her mother want to pinch his little face. And Xiaochun is only 7 years old, can he play games now... (Although today's children are also precocious)
Finally, there are some typos and punctuation errors
Tears are streaming down my face, why do I think this is a divine text [more serious face]
I'm crying. Are you a settings control?
When Xiaochun ran out, Yaoyue shouted to him: "Think carefully about the country. I hope we will be friends in the future. Not enemies. My country is: Paul Huige Empire. My name is also Yaoyue." Well, I was a little shocked, a 7-year-old child...
"Of course I support it. Dad will give you 1,000 yuan for your monthly living expenses." Children in this era are really rich. The 7-year-old's innocent smile made her mother want to pinch his little face. And Xiaochun is only 7 years old, can he play games now... (Although today's children are also precocious) Finally, there are some typos and punctuation errors
-_-|||18 Hours or more, no need to study anymore?