[Prince of Tennis] Traces of Sin

Treat the heroine as a boy!!?? Please stop using gender-insulting words!!!

Why does the author keep changing pronouns? It seems very poor. Third person is enough. Some things don't need to be written in such detail.

What should I do with you!!

This. . . Sometimes third person, sometimes first person. . .

Sweat first, isn't black mixed with silver threads a sign of gray hair?

The plot jumps too fast!!!!!

I have a classmate also called hell angle

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There's a lot of dialogue, but too little description. I'll have to work harder in the future.

... This speed, this span...