Snowflakes whirl across the sky, and memories intertwine. Our hearts ache with sorrow, leaving only desolation. Wherever you are in this world, I would gladly bear this longing for you.
Huh~~ I feel like the more I write, the better~~ What is my personal opinion~~ There are too many personal pronouns, especially "I"~~ The dialogues are a bit lengthy and most of them are quite "rushing". The pace is a bit fast and I feel that the plot description is lacking~~ The details of the primary and secondary issues are trivial and the characters have little impact on the structure of the plot. It would be nice if they were given an appearance. I don't have to blame them. Taiwan~~ Judging from the behavior and dialogue, the personalities of each character are not very distinct. I feel that each of them is quite wordy (piao me). Their tone of voice and attitude are somewhat similar to those of the previous children. Is it time to explain their age? I always feel like a child and sometimes an adult~~ The names of the people in the previous chapters are occasionally confusing~~ My personal opinion is for reference only~~ Come on!
Wei Yunfei in the second and third paragraphs should be Wei Shiyun, right?
Dear Ye Zi, come on!
Hehe... Come on, I believe in you
Honey! Not bad!
Not bad, work hard and support me
Come on xq, take your time, we don't need the best, we just want better!
Hehe. . . Like one
It's a slow-burning article, hehe... The writing skills are pretty good, I'm looking forward to the story behind it! It would be perfect if it could be more humorous or more gorgeous.
Huh~~ I feel like the more I write, the better~~ What is my personal opinion~~ There are too many personal pronouns, especially "I"~~ The dialogues are a bit lengthy and most of them are quite "rushing". The pace is a bit fast and I feel that the plot description is lacking~~ The details of the primary and secondary issues are trivial and the characters have little impact on the structure of the plot. It would be nice if they were given an appearance. I don't have to blame them. Taiwan~~ Judging from the behavior and dialogue, the personalities of each character are not very distinct. I feel that each of them is quite wordy (piao me). Their tone of voice and attitude are somewhat similar to those of the previous children. Is it time to explain their age? I always feel like a child and sometimes an adult~~ The names of the people in the previous chapters are occasionally confusing~~ My personal opinion is for reference only~~ Come on!
Wei Yunfei in the second and third paragraphs should be Wei Shiyun, right?
Dear Ye Zi, come on!
Hehe... Come on, I believe in you
Honey! Not bad!
Not bad, work hard and support me
Come on xq, take your time, we don't need the best, we just want better!
Hehe. . . Like one
It's a slow-burning article, hehe... The writing skills are pretty good, I'm looking forward to the story behind it! It would be perfect if it could be more humorous or more gorgeous.
La la la. My woman's books are just beautiful~