Let me end the preface of Chef's Notes with a horoscope given to me by someone else:
The power of God is unpredictable
Danger abounds
Intention:
Reader comments
Many Chinese and foreign myths are roughly the same. Gods repeatedly take resources but do not repay them. The problem will come early. In order to perfect the world, disasters occur, and there are many gods who cannot escape the disasters. Until the gods retire, humans become the protagonists of the world. Dayu has Jiuding to suppress luck. I don't know about foreign myths. With incense, the gods who rely on incense will perish when people do not believe in gods.
It feels pretty good and the content is quite novel. I look forward to the author's next update~
Based on the idea that writing an article is not easy, I gave the author 2 points, but I have to say that this article is the best among the several I have read. ,. . Road to stardom. . This road to stardom is really low-key. The male protagonist is also gentle and gentle. The heroine didn't see any domineering side of a top killer. I hope the author will read more books by colleagues in this field. I hope there will be greater progress and that this kind of content will match this kind of book title. I really want to say that I was deceived by the name into buying the entire book.
It's May Day~Update more diligently~
In fact, fried noodles can also be made very delicious and have a rich and mellow taste.
I saw three outstanding seedlings: Qing (killer temperament), cousin (gentle and considerate), and Prince (career-oriented), so I thought this article should be a story about a woman entangled in the emotional whirlpool of three men (or more later).
In addition, the female protagonist's baby clothes should be a more thoughtful setting.
The problem is that in the first chapter, the heroine's soul travels to a baby with a strange life experience who seems to be at the scene of a murder. However, the description of this section is really complicated and a bit difficult to understand. It should be said that the heroine's baby part is a bit obscure. There is no direct reference to the name. Only the replacement of this man and that man makes the reader slightly confused.
Above, the formal version is 8:
Text & Style: The text is a bit green and wordy, and there are a lot of meaningless dialogues in the dialogue descriptions. Although this is how we chat in real life, in the novel, dialogues, descriptions, and details that have little to do with the main clues can be omitted to highlight the central clues.
Plot: The heroine wakes up in a baby clothes, and is brought back to the mansion by the male lead Qing. The heroine was pampered as a teenager, but was rejected by Qing, but it was Qing who suggested that she practice kung fu? (There is a small contradiction here. Qing seems to hate her vulgarity and lack of rules, but why is he responsible for teaching her to practice kung fu? I think Qing's status in the palace should not be forced by the heroine's father? And the Taoist priest also came in a strange way, so I was conflicted.) Then the heroine entered the palace and met her two cousins, who had their own merits, so I thought this was the beginning of a palace fight.
Above, the plot is a bit bland, lacking twists and turns, lacking suspense, and not enough cuteness. So overall it's still too light. It narrates a process in a straightforward manner, but fails to capture the reader's curiosity, so it is not attractive enough.
Copywriting: The cuteness of the female protagonist is highlighted, but what about the male pig? Moreover, the explanations are not very clear, the cuteness is not very funny, and the cuteness is a bit stiff. . . But the concise and cute feeling is in the right direction, and it should only be a small step away. . .
Above, the opinions of one person are often biased. If there are any shortcomings, please forgive me and leave a 2-point comment. If you don't like it, please delete it. Thank you.
Qing, what you made was just Pian'er soup... I'm sorry to say. But as long as it's delicious!
Many Chinese and foreign myths are roughly the same. Gods repeatedly take resources but do not repay them. The problem will come early. In order to perfect the world, disasters occur, and there are many gods who cannot escape the disasters. Until the gods retire, humans become the protagonists of the world. Dayu has Jiuding to suppress luck. I don't know about foreign myths. With incense, the gods who rely on incense will perish when people do not believe in gods.
It feels pretty good and the content is quite novel. I look forward to the author's next update~
Based on the idea that writing an article is not easy, I gave the author 2 points, but I have to say that this article is the best among the several I have read. ,. . Road to stardom. . This road to stardom is really low-key. The male protagonist is also gentle and gentle. The heroine didn't see any domineering side of a top killer. I hope the author will read more books by colleagues in this field. I hope there will be greater progress and that this kind of content will match this kind of book title. I really want to say that I was deceived by the name into buying the entire book.
It's May Day~Update more diligently~
In fact, fried noodles can also be made very delicious and have a rich and mellow taste.
I saw three outstanding seedlings: Qing (killer temperament), cousin (gentle and considerate), and Prince (career-oriented), so I thought this article should be a story about a woman entangled in the emotional whirlpool of three men (or more later). In addition, the female protagonist's baby clothes should be a more thoughtful setting. The problem is that in the first chapter, the heroine's soul travels to a baby with a strange life experience who seems to be at the scene of a murder. However, the description of this section is really complicated and a bit difficult to understand. It should be said that the heroine's baby part is a bit obscure. There is no direct reference to the name. Only the replacement of this man and that man makes the reader slightly confused. Above, the formal version is 8: Text & Style: The text is a bit green and wordy, and there are a lot of meaningless dialogues in the dialogue descriptions. Although this is how we chat in real life, in the novel, dialogues, descriptions, and details that have little to do with the main clues can be omitted to highlight the central clues. Plot: The heroine wakes up in a baby clothes, and is brought back to the mansion by the male lead Qing. The heroine was pampered as a teenager, but was rejected by Qing, but it was Qing who suggested that she practice kung fu? (There is a small contradiction here. Qing seems to hate her vulgarity and lack of rules, but why is he responsible for teaching her to practice kung fu? I think Qing's status in the palace should not be forced by the heroine's father? And the Taoist priest also came in a strange way, so I was conflicted.) Then the heroine entered the palace and met her two cousins, who had their own merits, so I thought this was the beginning of a palace fight. Above, the plot is a bit bland, lacking twists and turns, lacking suspense, and not enough cuteness. So overall it's still too light. It narrates a process in a straightforward manner, but fails to capture the reader's curiosity, so it is not attractive enough. Copywriting: The cuteness of the female protagonist is highlighted, but what about the male pig? Moreover, the explanations are not very clear, the cuteness is not very funny, and the cuteness is a bit stiff. . . But the concise and cute feeling is in the right direction, and it should only be a small step away. . . Above, the opinions of one person are often biased. If there are any shortcomings, please forgive me and leave a 2-point comment. If you don't like it, please delete it. Thank you.
Qing, what you made was just Pian'er soup... I'm sorry to say. But as long as it's delicious!