Xuan Dan's background work, the second episode of the famous actress series. The last episode is red ribbon.
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It's pitiful to say 27! ! By the way, I like the feeling of Bai Lan lying motionless in a pool of blood! The white scum of the copywriting is shining brightly!
Nanzhu is really good...
So here I am. . . . .
First of all, the writing style is just right and the details are appropriate. There are no excessive scenery or appearance descriptions that hinder reading. The plot is tense and relaxed. Perhaps because it is still at the beginning of the novel and there is no climax yet, the reading is a bit dull. Secondly, the characters have distinct personalities, which is a great success. Each character performs his or her own duties and has its own use, with nothing superfluous. Finally... I'm allowed to complain. . . . The name of the heroine. . . . Quite a bit. . . . And that Junjiabao. . . Anyway, I'm so tired now that I still care about choosing another name, meow. . . . This Junjiabao is different from Weijiabao. . . . Good readers. . . This is true. . . . So~ come on~ look forward to the follow-up~
TUT
No matter what, just end itWhat's wrong?
I'll guess some of the foreshadowing myself.
It's pitiful to say 27! ! By the way, I like the feeling of Bai Lan lying motionless in a pool of blood! The white scum of the copywriting is shining brightly!
Nanzhu is really good...
So here I am. . . . . First of all, the writing style is just right and the details are appropriate. There are no excessive scenery or appearance descriptions that hinder reading. The plot is tense and relaxed. Perhaps because it is still at the beginning of the novel and there is no climax yet, the reading is a bit dull. Secondly, the characters have distinct personalities, which is a great success. Each character performs his or her own duties and has its own use, with nothing superfluous. Finally... I'm allowed to complain. . . . The name of the heroine. . . . Quite a bit. . . . And that Junjiabao. . . Anyway, I'm so tired now that I still care about choosing another name, meow. . . . This Junjiabao is different from Weijiabao. . . . Good readers. . . This is true. . . . So~ come on~ look forward to the follow-up~
TUT No matter what, just end itWhat's wrong? I'll guess some of the foreshadowing myself.