(One Piece) Let's Set Sail Together!
（海贼）一起航行吧！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 44k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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23Chapters
331Favorites
8.7Score
8.6kClicks per chapter
23Comments
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Is this the end? It feels so casual
Sorry, I never like to criticize people, but I have to say, is this a fantasy novel? Even if Devil Fruit is semi-fantasy, if you write it like this, it will become a fantasy novel. Also, what kind of plot is this? Luffy can be treated as soon as something happens. It's very interesting to see that there are no emotional fluctuations. To be honest, I like your writing style until you completely ruin it.
Sure enough. . . The psychological description is not good enough, the characters are a bit OOC, and there is no opportunity to cure the psychological shadow. The plot is running wildly at a rapid pace (I will tell you if you are used to it?), But it is still easier to accept than Mary Sue, the author, please give it a try OvO
Thousands sunny
I have a feeling about Tom Sue...
[1St floor] Author's reply Publication time: 2011-06-07 17:39:56 Tsk, if you don't look good, don't watch it! ! ! No one wants you to read it. If you have the ability, you can write it and see how beautiful you can write it. Author's attitude disgust
Well, this kind of character is considered a vampire, definitely not a noble vampire.
I'm really sorry that as someone who loves literature and psychology, I have to criticize = = (inhale and exhale) The plot of Ni Ma is too fast! ! ! == What do you think of the psychological shadow? ! ! ! ! == As someone who has had psychological problems before, I would like to say that it took a long time to cure them! ! ! Besides, even though it was cured, the shadow has always been there! ! ! And how about Yuu, whose trust was suddenly lost by Luffy? What about the red hair? ! Isn't it the same? ! Why did he refuse the red hair to join Luffy? ! == I'm really embarrassed to say that I think the author is a bit naive. He doesn't believe that people's shadows take time. Otherwise, give him an opportunity = = I'm very sorry. This is just the opinion of a person who has experienced shadow. Please don't mind if I offend you = =
Luffy's fans are... Excited. They usually write about Ace, but rarely see those about Luffy. Big support, come on!
Looks good, come on