A Good Beginning Does Not Always Have a Good Ending (Harry Potter Fanfiction)

Percival - Hmm... Is he an ancestor of Principal Dumbledore? I remember that was in his name

I would like to give you a serious comment~ The concept of the story is very grand so far, and the author has also done some research on the history of England. However, the progress of the plot so far seems to have just ended the prologue, and the plot trend cannot be seen. I have to say that if there is not enough space later, the structure will be a bit out of shape... So you should write more! In addition, as a fan, it seems to be labeled as Danmei. At this point in the article, there is basically no CP... This pair of children's shoes who are watching HP fan fiction has lost its appeal because they don't know much about King Arthur. However, I still think that the previous story may be more attractive to those who want to read King Arthur fan fiction... In addition, the dragon and the little queen who seem to be the protagonists, I have to say that the characterization is a bit weak and not enough to arouse the love of readers. On the contrary, the Prime Minister is more loving. Of course, as someone who was attracted to HP fandom, the reason why I persist until now is because of the imaginary JQ of the director of the Snake Yard and the Lion Yard, as well as the adult's writing skills and suspense setting, which made me firmly believe that the story will be very interesting as it unfolds ~

Really well written! Great. Keep writing.

It's good to have a dragon backing you up.

It is indeed worthy of the first family, so awesome.

So cute, so cute, so cute. Every protagonist and supporting character in the article is so cute!