[Harry Potter] On the Shadow's Edge

Despair, do you still remember that there is a pit here? "Come back soon -" (Erkang's hand)

... Clear everything, collect it first

Why do all I see are whiteboards = =

Why don't you stop here? ! ! ! Crazy!

Back to the light SAMA. . Merry Christmas~ Come on O(∩_∩)O~

It's been 10 days and a half and the update is still not over yet? Should I also leave my email address?

1332786684@□. COM Please give me some meat, thank you!

Short oil, why is it - half update

I thought it was over. . .

[Bishui will receive articles and comments in December]: Writing style: Needless to say, the writing style and words need not be said much. It can be seen that the author has practiced a lot in these two aspects. From what I saw, the author's writing style is actually quite gorgeous, haha, you can see it in the middle of the text. And then there is a bit of humor in the gorgeousness. By the way, it's really a good thing to complain about Shenma. Especially seeing Professor Snape's "frightened" expression - this is an embarrassing adjective. Plot: Well, in terms of plot, the speed of the first paragraph is really too fast OTZ. Rather than revealing the plot of the previous life so quickly, I think it would be better to introduce it slowly later on through interludes or flashbacks. The previous speed was very fast, which is equivalent to giving an introduction to HP in tens of thousands of words. There are also those extra chapters. After reading the whole article, I feel that it is best to throw all the extra chapters to the end, otherwise the timeline will be really messed up along the way. Otherwise, you can only skip those extras when watching it. However, this can be modified after the article is finished. Sorry, Jinjiang does not have the option to delete chapters yet. Characters: To be blunt, the characters in this article are out of shape, especially Harry, but I think this is Harry in the author's image. After reading the article, I always feel that the author prefers the Malfoy family, haha. But if you're a fan = =It's also good to write down what you like. I always think Professor Snape is cute and awkward. [The above only represents my own opinion]