
Mending the Heart
挽心
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 152k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
45Chapters
331Favorites
333Nutrient gifts
5.4kClicks per chapter
311Comments
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Sure enough, Lu Yao is such a good person! He is actually the most hurt person in the whole story! He gave so much enthusiasm but could not get true love. He traded a terminal illness for his beloved woman to accompany him through the last days of his life, and he did such admirable things. This boy is so touching! Instead of turning the despair in the face of life into the driving force to destroy everything, he silently did so many things for his beloved, which can be regarded as a saint of love! Next, how can the groom be replaced by Lin Jueyuan? Lu Yao shouldn't be able to witness Yan Yan put on a wedding dress and officially marry Lin Jueyuan. Will he choose to go abroad for medical treatment and escape?
As expected, I watched it all night last night! Fortunately, I didn't forget to leave another message at the service area of the expressway! Hehe~~ I finished reading The Four Lives last night, and I was very confused. I remembered a big abuse article I read on Douban Online Reading, called doggy. I highly recommend you to read it! It's a very short article, but I think it's quite inspiring!! ~Hehe, no more words, it's about to open again! Go back and use the computer to make up points
The heroine is a very strong person. I admire the heroine's character very much, and the hero loves her too, but I feel that the hero's love is too painful...
I finished reading all four parts of this series in one go, and Xizi and Lehuai are finally together.
It's not easy to squeeze the time out of a sponge and read the whole story of "Returning the Heart". It was nothing more than studying for the college entrance examination. Okay, sit down and think carefully. "Win the Heart" is a novel that is heart-breaking in the first half and heart-breaking in the second half. It is heart-wrenching in general and has a small H in some parts. It is still romantic and has a romantic tone. It is the last part of the Four Worlds Love Tribulation. I haven't read the previous three lives, so there are some small gaps in some places, but by using associations, the connections are almost inseparable, which does not affect the overall reading effect of this novel. Ke Xin put a lot of effort into the conception of this novel, and it is gripping. Every time when the reader is worried about how it will end, with a clever twist of the pen, the plot unfolds smoothly, echoing back and forth, flawlessly and admirably. The story frame is generally unconventional. Looking at it, the first feeling is that "there is something to watch." Undoubtedly, this is more than half the success. Of course, having a storyline that catches readers' attention is like having a good skeleton, but to make readers remember it for a long time, it is not enough to just have a frame. It also needs distinct characters and fluent and unobtrusive description techniques to fill in the flesh and blood. After repeated research, this article is just a good story and cannot be called a good novel. Why? There are three reasons: The characters have split personalities. This is the biggest problem. In the first half of the film, the male protagonist Lin Jueyuan is a scheming and evil-minded man who loves countless people and is headstrong. He does not know how to love and calls himself a lover, but he stabs the female protagonist again and again with the needle of love. In the end, both sides suffer losses. As the lover of such a man, the heroine Yan Yan is sensitive, self-respecting, and a little aloof, but she has to swallow her anger due to practical reasons. At the end, the male protagonist's dark and domineering energy deflated like a balloon, and the uncle became a young man. Although he occasionally played tricks like a little brat, such as kicking out the plug and secretly kissing the female protagonist, it felt like the male co-star Lu Yao was possessed. The heroine is also not stable enough. The sensitivity like Sister Zilin disappeared, and she turned into Sister Xifeng. She is exquisite in all aspects, showing off her acting skills, intimidating a whole family, and at the same time hypnotizing herself: I am not hurting the male partner, I am forced by the whole family, and I am doing it for my great love. Excessive embellishment only detracts from the characters in the novel. No one is perfect without Jin's bare feet. Some people love Sister Lin's fragility, and some people prefer Xifeng's smoothness. She is half Sister Lin and half Sister Xifeng. She is incompetent. Then there is the mother of the male partner, who is vague and difficult to figure out. It is uncertain what kind of image she will appear in the next moment, and she will say something shocking. The character's personality is split and split in this way, which will make you feel troubled on different levels. Emotional entanglement, entanglement has become a deadlock. The previous description has been about the male protagonist's self-righteous pampering, but it has stimulated the female protagonist's sensitive and fragile nerves. It is the same as flattering a horse's hooves and complaining about it. Why can't I please you? Why don't you drag me? Where is the heroine? She hated, hated his torture, physically and mentally, and was afraid to avoid him. Then, with inexplicable emotion and worry that she could not find a better man in the future, she accepted the male partner. Later, after a series of events, the female protagonist chose to escape and stay away from the male protagonist, his partner, and their family. However, the male partner became terminally ill, and the female protagonist took great care of him. Next, she texted the hero before leaving - I love you! Then, when the male partner was in the hospital, recuperating, and after returning home, the two secretly flirted with each other, and then their relationship began to heat up rapidly. They fell in love overwhelmingly, painfully and touchingly. What is this for? The entanglement of this love triangle was puzzling until the end, with each other expressing their true feelings to each other inexplicably, and then bursting into tears for no apparent reason. It was obviously a deception to the male co-star Lu Yao, and it was obviously a moral injury, but these two people still felt confident, trying their best to exaggerate their greatness and touchingness, and accepted their incompetence. Details are not handled properly. Some inexplicable plots suddenly appeared which made people confused. After reading the author's reply, I realized, oh, so that's how it is, it actually makes sense. A typical example is in Chapter 25, where the heroine accepts the male partner. Two readers said they could not understand: "Anyway, I think it is unreliable for the heroine to find Lu Tai, just because Lu saved her. Isn't she arrogant? What does this mean now?" Then the author replied: You two go to the next chapter. The author has something to say. I hope my explanation satisfies you~ After all, it is true that the author strives to make his article reasonable, but it is not good to leave it outside the article. Not everyone who reads a novel also reads the author's reply and listens to your explanation, so naturally, these unreasonable jump plots will cause readers to doubt the author's ability to tell the story, and even lose interest in continuing to follow the story.
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I cried for the second male lead, and I remembered a sentence: Love with a man's heart, and don't need extra episodes. No matter who he ends up with, it will be very heartbreaking. I think that after chapter 40, it will be too fairy tale. Both the male and female protagonists have awkward temperaments, and it is really a sad love.
I cried for the second male lead, and I remembered a sentence: Love with a man's heart, and don't need extra episodes. No matter who he ends up with, it will be very heartbreaking. I think that after chapter 40, it will be too fairy tale. Both the male and female protagonists have awkward temperaments, and it is really a sad love.
It's been a long time since I posted and commented on this post, but I just recently had time to start reading it!! It's a very interesting and attractive article~ But I haven't finished it yet~~
What a long series of novels! Although some articles are long, they always talk about one person's life, but this article talks about the four lives of the same soul, and they are four lives in different periods, different countries, and even different time and space. Among the four lives, there are two people together, and some two people are not together, some are happy, and some are sad. Read them all, and it is really hard to feel that love comes! If there is love in reality, everyone should still actively strive for it and safeguard it... After reading the whole series, what I admire the most is Kexin. In such a long series, it can be updated almost every day. To be honest, there are really a lot of pitfalls in JJ now. High-quality authors like Kexin are really rare! Although there are not too many people commenting every day, each comment is actually a comment made by everyone after reading it carefully. It is the real feedback of every reader. Kexin also patiently writes a reply to each comment. This is the real interaction. It is much better than the empty likes, support, etc. Below some articles! Getting everyone's sincere likes, even if there are few people, is better than a bunch of random and unintentional comments! Of course this is my personal opinion... I admire your dedication and continue to follow the article!