When did I fall for that bookish county magistrate?
Was it when he was injured by an explosion while protecting me as we pursued a criminal?
Or when I tried to steal a kiss while he was drunk, only for him to take liberties with me instead?
Or perhaps even earlier, the first time I laid eyes on him...
No one knows when love begins, but once it does, it runs deep...
[An early work. Expect plenty of melodramatic shockers. Read at your own risk.]
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I want to know if Gu Hua and Su Sanshao are really impossible. I like them two very much. What a pity. Well
Lu Qingyan wouldn't have heard it
Ouch, when I watched the first half of the movie, I felt that Lu Qingyan was a scumbag. . . .
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Glaze, I'm here to submit a review. I deserve death for taking so long to write this review. And because the article is quite long, I haven't had time to finish it. Let's talk about what I saw first. In addition, comments may have some minor deviations in consciousness due to incomplete reading of the content. If you continue to beat yourself up, you deserve death... The language and content of this article are very humorous, especially the tone of Xiaowu's words, what he said when he got into trouble and after he got into trouble, and the ideas he came up with when he was teasing people. Sometimes it makes people laugh (anyway, I did laugh in some places - -). Glaze's writing is very beautiful, not rhetorically gorgeous, but it is certainly profound and very comfortable to read, especially some of the vocabulary and sentences that made me marvel. However, it is precisely because there is too much emphasis on the accumulation of beautiful descriptions that the character's personality and plot development are often ignored (this is also a problem I have always had). I always feel that sometimes the plot is very dragging. To use an analogy, it's like a restaurant that serves steamed fish and braised ham. Both are delicious, but they give people different feelings. The writing of Glaze belongs to the category of steamed fish. It is peaceful and has no ups and downs. It is not bad, but it is always missing something. Because if it were me, the one that left a deeper impression would definitely be the braised pork chop... (What kind of metaphor is this, just to express my pity...) The above paragraph is just an opinion on the plot. This is something that most writers have. Once this problem is solved, you can usually become a pink to god-level writer... Then, talk about the characters. In fact, I have always liked the male supporting characters, Su Banxia and Wen Qingliang (I guess, I always saw them as gentle and kind at first, and I struggled for a long time as to why they had such names...), Even though it took a long time after giving him an appearance before letting him appear again, I still like them... Because I have always been a master who ignores the protagonists, and I don't like male supporting characters to meet people from the Death Star. I like Wen Qingliang's scoundrel and bad character very much. Let's continue the analogy. If the county magistrate is a bowl of refreshing and moist vegetable and tofu soup, then Qingliangjun is a bowl of rich and delicious bird's nest and shark's fin soup (how come they are food, and the difference between the two soups is too big, how can the county magistrate be so shabby - -). I like both kinds of soups, but the one that usually shocks people's taste must be the latter. But if the latter is the protagonist, then the person who drinks the soup will definitely die of excess energy and blood... This is why the protagonist is usually a vegetable and tofu soup with a weak personality. . . . About female characters. Originally this article was written around the carefree and bully-like Xiao Wu, so I'll just talk about her. I have to say that Glazi portrayed her character very well and never lost her shape from beginning to end, at least until what I saw. She didn't undergo a personality change due to the development of the plot, which is good! (Someone often writes that the protagonist's personality changes suddenly, and then readers will yell "Who are you?" When reading it...) I like Xiao Wu's character very much, but I'm really not used to her always calling herself elder sister. I don't know why it's so awkward TUT (could it be my mysophobia...) Suddenly I remembered something, and I jumped in... (This is such an illogical comment...) This article is an ancient romance, not a time travel, right? The text of the glaze is very ancient, the places, characters and events are all from ancient times... Then why do modern words pop up from time to time? Ah, forget about TUT vocabulary. Sometimes you will see modern things floating around in the article. Although this is not offensive in online articles, sometimes it feels very time-travel... But I just wrote it like this for a relaxed feeling. Forgive me for being a strict person TUT Okay, let's jump back. In short, this article has many merits (then why haven't you finished reading it yet!). Just by looking at the summary of the "Compendium of Materia Medica" at the beginning of each chapter, you can see that Huazi is very careful. What I admire very much is that almost every drug name in every chapter contains foreshadowing. Glaze's perseverance also made me sigh, how many words are there! I definitely don't have the patience to write such a long article... I really need to learn from your diligence! (Look at you, look at me, you are a decadent piece of shit...) I hope Glazier will like this late comment TUT which is full of complaints (it's pretty good if you don't hate it!)
When I first watched it, I thought it was too humorous. It made me feel like Xiaowu was like a little idler. But I found out that she behaved in various "bully" ways, forget it. Xiaowu also has a bad temper. You want me to try being a county magistrate. I won't shoot her to death! Although Of course, she didn't do anything very bad. But it's wrong to take other people's things without paying for them!! The county magistrate was too calm at first. What I imagined about him was that he was an arrogant and conceited person~ It's different when he has an identity! And if I want to be with Xiao Wu, why is Mao still having an affair with Shi Shui? I think Xiao Wu and Su Baijie are pretty good together, although he feels a bit like a big brother. But this is very heartwarming. And Su Banxia... I think so. I want this too. What a brother. He is very kind to Xiao Wu. And he feels that he is quite attentive to the people he likes. He doesn't look like a bully at all. Xiao Wu is the bully! It's a pity that Gu Hua... This Gu Hua listens too much to adults... I feel sorry for Su Banxia... I think. If the county magistrate were not a prince, Xiao Wu would be happy. And as a prince, he is much older in my mind. Lao Jiu should be a good person. Hehe. Why do I feel that Lao Jiu is younger than Xiao Shiliu? Being an emperor is a bit unaccustomed. He doesn't look like an emperor at all. Did you use all the words to render the scene? I feel that the plot develops so slowly.. Although the connection is very good. Oh, it suddenly occurred to me that Xiao Wu looks like a person. Oh. It's the one in Legend of Sword and Fairy 1... It's a pity that Xiao Wu is much more savage than her. Speaking of which, I fell asleep once while watching it. Maybe it was because the description of the environment was too comfortable. Later, because the plot developed too slowly, I didn't know where the climax was for a long time. So I ignored the descriptions at a glance. Wow... The progress was so fast. I finished reading it... At first, I really liked the explanations of the nouns in front of it. .. Then it disappeared. Then Xiao Wu had a relationship with the county magistrate, so what! Although Xiao Wu was reluctant... But it was seen that it was necessary for the plot - in fact, Xiao Wu liked Lao Jiu a bit. Otherwise, how could he still care about him after being molested so much?? No matter it was before or now, Xiao Xianzi's literary talent is still very good. Now it is much better than before. Although your modern prose is more popular than ancient prose, I think you Writing ancient prose seems to better highlight your literary talent. I continue to feel that being a writer is actually very difficult. I just coded a few hundred words yesterday and I can't continue. I am still more suitable for writing diaries. Thinking about it carefully, I feel that the content of this novel seems to be too little. (This is definitely not because I read ten lines at a glance) There should be a few more major events to impress the readers. But the characters are quite distinct. I still want to say that I like Su Banxia haha. If I write in the future, try to write more about the plot and less about that. It is not verbose and can help the plot develop better. Right - - but some people may like to read those words. I am a science student and I don't... Why do I catch a cold... I care more about the promotion of the plot. I hope to see better articles next time. Although I prefer to read modern articles. Write more modern articles for the Leng family to read. Sometimes I don't like ancient Chinese prose that seems too clumsy. But this is also my personal problem. Ha. I'll leave it at that.
Okay... The bluegrass is dead too?
I have been a bully for a long time, so today my conscience strikes me and I would like to leave a comment to you. Chai'er's writing skills have always been very good, but the original modern words did not show the advantages of her writing, so I still love the ancient words. This article is okay. Judging from the beginning, the plot has outstanding points. Xiaowu's writing is good. Although your male protagonist is a scumbag and has made people angry (bad laugh), but from the chapters I have read, the male protagonist is still relatively loving. I hope I have masochistic tendencies. Silent... Okay, I haven't written a long review for a long time, so I'll try to write one~ 1. The plot is good and compact, making people want to keep watching. 2. Writing, this has always been your advantage. The writing does not have long and complicated descriptions, but looks much cleaner than before. The concise writing style writes touching stories. I like this kind of author. (Hope, Hua'er's life is complete.) 3. Characters, everyone's character is very outstanding, and they all have one thing in common, that is, these people are all monsters! Monsters have love, don't they?!! (Silence... I already have incorrect views, and the children at home don't want to learn from it.) 4. Finally, this is my suggestion, depict the emotions between the characters more fully and highlight some feelings, so that it will be more touching. (Of course, readers like me who have a wrong outlook on things will light up when they see monsters... Silently... I face the wall and think about the past.)
In fact, I also hope that the county magistrate will just be a county magistrate.