I never thought I'd have to write a blurb. I'm such a failure after all = =
Hello, everyone.
Well, as you can see from the title, this story is set in A Certain Scientific Railgun. The heroine is a tragic, pitiful girl, and she's joined by a sarcastic best friend who pretends to be a childhood friend. The original's Misaka and all that stuff make up the main focus of this story.
If you happened to click in by accident, please read the first chapter carefully to get a feel for the author's style and writing. If you find it uncomfortable, feel free to curse me. The X in the upper-right corner is there for you.
Honestly, I think the writing style is really lighthearted, but someone doesn't believe me.
Corrections and reviews are welcome.
(The ending of the
How should I put it? I don't understand it at all. Author, what do you want to express by using the parallel universe theory? As a mere passing reader, I haven't found what you wanted to express at all. In recent years, several old routines have become popular from Area 11, including the time-advance loop of E17, the parallel loop of the Four and a Half Myth series, the otherworld loop of When the Higurashi Cries, and even the abused quantum physics theory when it appeared in When the Sea Cat Cries, including Schrödinger's cat (box). These routines have different functions. They can either promote the development of the plot (there is a well-known example of this type: Inception), or they can reflect the characters' personality traits beyond their usual performance. But after all, there is a main (dark) line that is clearly expressed to the audience between the first loop and at the latest after. So looking back at your article, when it loops between two parallel universes (maybe the word switch is better used here), there is no main line connection, and it has no role in advancing the plot, at least I didn't see it. So I think you may have been too deeply influenced by some loop-type works and copied them here. In summary, my opinion is that the author is not skilled enough to control the loop structure. It is recommended to rewrite it and replace it with a story structure that makes it easier to express what the author wants to express. If you must write a loop-type structure, please make an outline yourself first and clearly describe the interaction between parallel universes (or you can use a chronological format). The other is to strengthen your writing skills and express what you want to express accurately. Then there is the reduction of the number of characters, their names, titles, and how they call each other. If the current incomprehension is due to my personal understanding or the author's deliberate suspense and foreshadowing, please ignore my comments.
Ah, take it away decisively.
The Lily drama is very interesting~