Perhaps the Warmth of Midsummer

Search [Author] [Xihuai Xiaosong] in Jinjiang, enter the store, and find the novel outline that best suits you—— Comments on the article: My writing style is good~ But it can also be seen that I am a newcomer, so I should be looking forward to someone reading my article. I would like to give you a few comments. One is that you should not be too idealistic when setting up the plot. This will make the article look very characterless. Furthermore, your grasp of the characteristics of the characters is not good enough. This can be seen from the dialogue between the characters. I believe you will also feel it when you read the article. Also, there must be no novel outline for you, because the plot of your story is a bit messy, which is not good. The purpose of a novel is to tell a story to the readers, a story that will make the readers immersed in the story. A good novel must have an outline. Come on~