Yesterday, she was still playing with a bunch of adorable, slightly mischievous kids at kindergarten. But today, because of some invisible evil spirit, her own older brother locked her up inside a barrier. Oh, heavens, you've been so good to me. What spiritual powers? What evil spirits? What family rules? What monsters and vengeful ghosts? None of that has anything to do with me. Just leave me alone, all of you…
Commentary on Immortal Sword Yun Yang's Song of Sigh
First of all, I am inexplicably interested in what the author thought of the name. The heroine's name is [Yun Duo]. = =||| Could it be that the author looked at the sky and clouds when he was bored, and suddenly got this name on a whim? I mourned for the heroine. I guess she must have killed my irresponsible mother now (⊙_⊙)?
Since he has traveled to the Fairy Sword, it is completely understandable that he wants to have an elegant name. The word "cloud" is used well. Yun is both pure and unattainable, so it's not a bad name for the heroine. But you don't have to call it Yun Duo. You can call it Yun Ni, Yun Ling, or Yun Qing. Isn't it better than Yun Duo? Although the clouds are also very cute.
After complaining about the name, I will now complain about the evil spirit. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel that the author's definition of evil spirit is a bit like Kubo's definition of Hollow in Bleach. I would like to ask if the author is also an anime fan, and does he also like to watch Bleach? Who is your favorite among the Shinigami? Personally, I prefer Kuchiki Byakuya and Ukitake Jūshirō, haha... Okay, I'm getting off topic.
Chapter 1: To be honest, I found it a little confusing. I explained to Yun Duo why An Ruoqing came out about the evil spirits. If An Ruoqing is also a member of the spirit-killing clan, why did Yun Duo accept it without any doubts and surprise? Then Yun Sheng appeared and explained the spiritual power to Yun Duo, feeling that things went too smoothly. Moreover, many things are mentioned in one go, which is a bit overwhelming.
The author has a very rich imagination, and the pictures he paints with the simplest vocabulary and organization are very warm.
Now it has only been updated to Chapter 6. The slow speed makes me wonder, big... You are not fooled, are you? (The following is an unscrupulous and unscrupulous convulsion. In fact, you don't need to read it. I'm shy...)
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I'll give you points first, and you'll see more later. . . Embarrassed
Commentary on Immortal Sword Yun Yang's Song of Sigh First of all, I am inexplicably interested in what the author thought of the name. The heroine's name is [Yun Duo]. = =||| Could it be that the author looked at the sky and clouds when he was bored, and suddenly got this name on a whim? I mourned for the heroine. I guess she must have killed my irresponsible mother now (⊙_⊙)? Since he has traveled to the Fairy Sword, it is completely understandable that he wants to have an elegant name. The word "cloud" is used well. Yun is both pure and unattainable, so it's not a bad name for the heroine. But you don't have to call it Yun Duo. You can call it Yun Ni, Yun Ling, or Yun Qing. Isn't it better than Yun Duo? Although the clouds are also very cute. After complaining about the name, I will now complain about the evil spirit. I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I feel that the author's definition of evil spirit is a bit like Kubo's definition of Hollow in Bleach. I would like to ask if the author is also an anime fan, and does he also like to watch Bleach? Who is your favorite among the Shinigami? Personally, I prefer Kuchiki Byakuya and Ukitake Jūshirō, haha... Okay, I'm getting off topic. Chapter 1: To be honest, I found it a little confusing. I explained to Yun Duo why An Ruoqing came out about the evil spirits. If An Ruoqing is also a member of the spirit-killing clan, why did Yun Duo accept it without any doubts and surprise? Then Yun Sheng appeared and explained the spiritual power to Yun Duo, feeling that things went too smoothly. Moreover, many things are mentioned in one go, which is a bit overwhelming. The author has a very rich imagination, and the pictures he paints with the simplest vocabulary and organization are very warm. Now it has only been updated to Chapter 6. The slow speed makes me wonder, big... You are not fooled, are you? (The following is an unscrupulous and unscrupulous convulsion. In fact, you don't need to read it. I'm shy...) Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster Ah, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster More, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster Ah, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster More, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster
I'll give you points first, and you'll see more later. . . Embarrassed