Whose Home Does the Spring Dream-Rain Drift Toward?

The sentences are smooth and the central idea is clear! Great article!

The sentences are fluent, making people feel very real after reading them, and they are rich in associations.

The wording is appropriate! Creative! I want to learn more!!!

Got it! Slow work, careful work!

I look forward to the next article every day. Don't let the author get into it. He is always immersed in his father's pain!