Beauty in a Turbulent World

I like your article. I hit the cute spot. Come on, I'll accept it.

I trembled immediately when I saw someone borrowing the toilet = =. Ha ha.

Come on, it's finally updated!

Are you cheating? T^TT^T

I didn't understand the last two chapters.

It's really well written and well thought out! I love this wind!!

I don't know why the plot always feels a bit strange.

Good Words and Style Shop | Order for Nostril Picking Essence Author, here I am. When I took the order, I went to take a look. I found that I was stuck in the streamer, ate ejaculate and was pulled into the secret room. I really wanted to see the follow-up. After all, the beggar and the peasant girl became warm overnight during the severe crackdown, and they fought for hundreds of rounds. It was really a cool story. After reading the first 34 chapters, I felt like this: Take off your clothes and get into bed. Please hurry up if you have premature ejaculation! This article feels like there is a lot of suspense. After reading one chapter, I feel that the suspense set up before has not been revealed yet. Then I wait for the next chapter, but a new suspense comes again, which makes people irritable. Now let's talk about the plot. It's written in big letters and it's historical time travel. I don't know why I didn't add a label. The heroine wanted to use the toilet to catch someone talking about important things, so she was moved into a storm (actually because she looked like a princess of Chu, right?), Was proposed to her inexplicably, entered the mansion, and then met again. In the end, Shiliu was targeted by several waves of people because Shiliu was involved in a bigger turmoil. He met his fiancé, entered Shiliu's house and became a central member of the house fight. From the big picture, I think it is relatively clear. The main line is very clear, but the jokes connected under the main line have to be said to have a lot of flaws. First of all, the heroine is an orphan from a mountain village. It was the first time she bumped into someone else. To be honest, it was a bit weird that they said it was not a big deal and then immediately grabbed the heroine. They could have added some plot to it. Later, the heroine knew that they were looking for a picture based on just guessing, and the connection was a bit jumpy. Later, when she met Da Lang's son, she immediately gave the heroine the most important thing. Isn't that child too innocent? What the child's mother said deepened the suspense, but it felt too inconsistent. And later when we meet the princess and the prince of Chu, the plot has too many suspenses that are not intertwined and make people feel disjointed. Especially since she is willing to sacrifice her life to save the prince of Chu, there is no connection between them. The most important thing is that there are too many characters in it and I can't remember who is with whom. It's dizzying to watch. Let's talk about the character of the heroine. At first glance, I thought she was hiding her power and biding her time. After all, I knew from the words and deeds of several people that they didn't need to apologize. I was drawn to this kind of heroine as soon as I saw her. She is gentle, generous, and has a rift in her heart. The more she becomes The more I look at it, the more I feel that the heroine has no characteristics and is always led by others. She only gave half of the picture that she had reservations to Sixteen, but the jade pendant that Mrs. Wu gave her was taken away. At that time, I thought, heroine, are you pretending to be delicate? After meeting her fiancé, she learned that her fiancé was going to marry another woman. Instead of trying to save her, the heroine disliked her character more and more. Sometimes she felt that she was very smart, sometimes she felt that she was very strong and had a tough personality, and sometimes she felt that she was very kind and would give up her life for a strange man. A heroine with these characteristics should have her own characteristics, but the overall concept made the heroine look like a completely different person with no personality at all. For example, I feel that the heroine's fiancé Zheng Shaoqing had some premeditated plan for marrying his wife. The heroine didn't seem to notice it, which is not in line with the original wisdom of the heroine! Talking about the man in it, I used to think that the male protagonist was Sixteen, but I thought he was too thoughtful. I thought he was a harmless and warm guy before, but later I found out that I was blind. He has no affection for the heroine, and is even a little perverted. I think his personality contrast is too big. If you want to make the characters in the novel more exciting, you don't need to write out some things at all, just mention them vaguely. Writing Sixteen's character too clearly will make it look unsightly. Personally, I think Zheng Shaoqing was well portrayed. He did abandon the heroine and marry a wife, but his eyes and uncontrollable expression made me feel that he has a story in his heart, and his character will always be like this, which will increase the suspense. It's a pity that he is not the male protagonist. I think the Prince of Chu in it is also a key character. I mistakenly chose Ajie as the heroine. If the heroine is really the princess of Chu, forget it. If not, can you please let him be the male protagonist? The more scenes he has, the less I like him! Finally, you can solve some of your suspense first and then set up the next one. Otherwise, it will be really confusing. Come on!

Come on, author, spread the flowers! *★,°*:.☆\\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* .

Liu Guang's character is not very obvious.