An NPC Will Love Me in Your Place

Very interesting! The heroine definitely has a golden finger!

Xuan Xiao collapsed in various ways, and Xuan Xiao's crazy fans expressed their inability to accept it

It's quite interesting. In fact, it would be better for the author to give Chonglou a home later. I really can't seriously write a side story. Isn't it too perfunctory to explain it in such a hasty way after struggling for so long?

I came to read this article because I watched "Abandoned Wives Chasing Stars", and then I read all the VIP chapters in one go, but found that I gradually lost the desire to read more. I always felt very disappointed. After all, the copywriting is so attractive, but the VIP content makes people feel that it is not as good as before VIP. Generally speaking, the quality of the text has dropped after opening VIP. It makes people feel that the author is perfunctory. When I read the last ten or so chapters, I skipped reading because I had the idea that if I read it seriously, it would be a waste of time... The content after VIP makes people feel that the gain is not worth the loss. In short, I hope the author will continue to work harder. It doesn't matter if it is slower, but the quality must at least be guaranteed...

I really admire the author's infinite imagination, and he actually brought Sword 3, Sword 4, and Ancient Sword together. I like Sword 4 and Ancient Sword very much and have played them many times. Recently, Sword 4 has an audio version, and I am currently replaying it. I still can't hide it when I see my favorite characters being imagined like this by the author. This novel cannot be said to be an online game at all. It is more appropriate to say it is a fairy tale and a fairy tale. It's a novel written by a novice like this. It's okay to read it to kill time when you're really bored. There's no need to spend money. Buying all the Vs will give you a small gift. Such a novel is simply not worth spending money on.

I prefer Chonglou TTATT

It's over so soon, and I feel a bit reluctant to let it go.

Is it almost over? This chapter has been there for several days? ?

Pfft, I'm really sorry. I think it's really unkind for me to laugh, but I saw someone's complaint in front of me and I really want to laugh Don't get me wrong, I just think it's funny to complain, and I admire that person for being able to find so many flaws. In fact, this article just hit my heart - Xuan Xiao, I think when I first played Fairy Sword 4, I was filled with a lot of love for this BOSS and a lot of resentment towards the production team of Fairy Sword 4 Why do you have to make Xuan Xiao so miserable? - - Not to mention that after being a human popsicle for so long, he will eventually be forced to play sex at the bottom of the East China Sea for the rest of his life. T T Ahem, okay, let's get back to the point. I didn't read all of this article, I just read the front, and then I saw the complaint. I'll tell you what I think. Indeed, there are many inconsistencies in the tone of the article, such as those in the complaint. [A very beautiful little girl in green appeared in front of her and said in a sweet voice] [Still pretty but extremely ordinary face] [The face of the little girl opposite changed slightly, but she quickly recovered and remained the same] Wait, these sentences are indeed just like what the reviewer said. The sentences are unclear and some words are too colloquial. It is undeniable that these are all flaws. I think this is undeniable. Even if some sentences don't make sense, when read, uh, how should I put it, it feels like the sentences are just sentences, not like an article. A good article, if nothing else, gives the reader the most important feeling that it should read smoothly and have the feeling that the reader can read it in one breath. For this article, it may be a little lacking, In terms of characters, the heroine's portrayal may be a bit too flat, and the author's article involves two very popular BOSS-level characters. That's why it gives people a Mary Sue feeling (after all, there are too many female protagonists like Jin Jiang now, who are the same, flat, and faceless. It feels like any character can be brought into it) One more word, it feels like the image of the heroine in some Japanese love games AVG we play, (in Japanese love AVG games, in order to enhance the player's sense of involvement, this image of the heroine is deliberately created), The problem is that you, the author, are not making a game, you are writing an article, so it is very necessary to deeply shape the image of the protagonist. Compared with many good articles, many times you may not even remember the name of the article or the specific plot. But many people will remember the name of the protagonist. Nowadays, it is better to write articles on Jinjiang. The articles pay great attention to this point. I think this is another shortcoming of the author that needs to be strengthened. But at the same time, I want to say that it is not easy for the author to write articles. I have been living in Jinjiang for more than ten years. I have also had the idea of writing an article, but I gave up in the end. In the final analysis, it is difficult to persist. The author's persistence in writing an article to this point is actually worthy of praise. I don't completely agree with that dear friend's complaint, because some places are too literal-minded. I think even great writers like Yu Qiuyu will be found fault with this kind of picking method. Moreover, ahem, that person's statement is also quite sharp, which may make it more difficult for the author to accept his opinion. However, I think it is undeniable that the friend's intentions are good. I think as the author, you should remove those shortcomings and take a good look at the friend's comments. As you can see, that person did point out many shortcomings of the author. Anyway, at least that person had carefully read your article, the author, so that he could have written that complaint. Doesn't every author make progress through the criticism of readers? Although it has been said that "only with criticism can one enter," none of us can deny that this is indeed the case. Each of us has done something wrong and been criticized by others. Then we will definitely remember this mistake and the chance of making it again will definitely be reduced. The same is true for the author. I think that blindly praising is not for the author's benefit. Only when criticism from readers can point out some of the author's shortcomings can the author realize his own shortcomings and make up for them so as to continue to improve. Others' criticism is definitely more unpleasant than praise, but I still really hope that the author can see something useful in the criticism (ahem, - - I don't know how to turn it into a speech T T). However, the author's hard work is worthy of recognition. Novice writers must have shortcomings of one kind or another. No one is a master at the beginning. But I believe that as long as you are determined, progress is certain. Of course, I think the author should sincerely accept well-intentioned criticism. This is not only an attitude, but also a motivation for your progress. As for some troublemakers who fish in troubled waters, just ignore them. Some clowns dance more happily the more you pay attention to them. Just ignore them and just watch them entertain everyone as a clown. Jinjiang has developed all the way up to now, and to be honest, I have read a lot. Many times, some readers clearly criticize in good faith, while some people with bad intentions fish in troubled waters, making the water muddier and muddier. In the end, it is difficult to tell who is kind and who is malicious. In short, I hope the author can distinguish who has good intentions and who has bad intentions, and can continue to improve and write better and better. Come on! ! ! ╭(╯3╰)╮ PS: Ahem, it's been a long time since I've written such a long comment. For this reason, the author should work hard, hold on PPS: We are purely expressing our feelings and telling you our own feelings. We will not accept ginseng cock Also: I admire the relative who made complaints very much. He was aboveboard when he complained, and he said whatever he said. In fact, it was considered ape excrement. Is the person left behind because he couldn't get along with her? Author, if you have a good communication with him, you might gain a lot from it.