The classroom was quiet. The students all stared curiously at the front of the room. They'd heard that a Chinese-French student would be joining their class today, and now they sized up the girl before them with curious eyes. She was of average height, with fairly fair skin and an unremarkable face. Her hair was casually twisted into a bun, and her dark eyes took in everyone's stares. There was something carefree about her, as if nothing could hold her interest. The people before her seemed no more than tree stumps.
"Come on, introduce yourself." Their homeroom teacher, Ms. Yang, was a kind middle-aged woman who taught chemistry. What people remembered most about her was her naturally curly hair.
"Hello, everyone. My name is Meng Lin," the girl said in flawless Chinese.
"Meng Lin, starting today, it begins. Once you've saved up 500,000, you can leave this place."
Looking forward to your update is a distant dream
I rarely see this type of content... Well, I'm slowly getting into the content. So, the foreshadowing is still too long... Do you want to change the copy? Can't tell what it's about
The length is too long. Generally, one article of 3,000 to 5,000 words will be enough. Too much seems a bit hard. For a new article, it is better to place the paragraphs in interesting places~
It's very long... It doesn't feel like there's anything outstanding about it. You should be more appetizing
Newcomer... Step on it...