
Urban Mutation
都市异变
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 104k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
32Chapters
80Favorites
907Clicks per chapter
56Comments
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Seeing this, I don't know what this Zhang Xiaohu is doing. He hasn't saved anyone, he seems to have no ability, and he is dying one after another. Each story seems to be "it looks weird, but there seems to be nothing unusual". I can't stand this feeling of being slow! Hope to see what can be reversed at the end!
I think it's actually not a bad ending. The suspense built up finally has a clear and reasonable explanation.
... The writing is really good! The plot of the supernatural story is also good. It should be connected to each other, but I feel that there is not much connection between the stories. The most speechless thing is, how do relationships develop? Even the interactions between the pig's feet are not as much as those with Zuo Zuo and Mo Yu. The poor kid = =I ignored these minor flaws. Overall, I was very satisfied. It's a pity that the ending was unfinished. (PS: What the kid downstairs said was so hurtful! It's not easy for the author to write!)
- -.. I feel like I was tricked by the author, the article is only half written. . There was little communication and interaction among the pig trotters. They only wrote about some events, but left many others unexplained. In the end, it was said that the left hand disappeared. Now that it is over, you still come up with such a move. There was no foreshadowing about the mysterious things about the left hand in the early stage, and it suddenly became apparent. It is inexplicable whether what you said makes sense. Overall, your writing is really good. Apart from the "big flow" of the tomb robbing part, the plot still holds up in a world where there are so many bad stories today. But, author, you are so unkind. In this case, it is better not to write. An author who is not responsible for his own writing is not a good author. You can ignore us, but since you have written it, you must be worthy of yourself. It doesn't matter if you encounter a bottleneck. It doesn't matter if you are busy in real life. You can make pitfalls. Such a mess is just nonsense. To be honest, I am very angry. Please don't write articles in the future. Please!
Why... It's over... Don't write anymore... What a pity...
Why... It's over... Don't write anymore... What a pity...
╮(╯_╰)╭ Is gone? No way
I'd better wait for another story~
This is probably the end...
The protagonist should have more roles~