The Sky Palace Prequel: Legend of the Mirror Stone

Applause, the character is more in line with the game, so... When will the author publish the main story? Can you post a link or message?

Ahhhhhhh, I wonder if I can post it this time. Come on, author, you must persevere.

Thank you for the meal, Jingshi 99

Thank you for your hard work, I love Naiwen very much ;)

In fact, I prefer diving, but it's rare to see a Jingshi work completed and I can't help but come up to cheer for the author~~ Come on, look forward to the text!!

It's over, spread the flowers! It's rare to see a Jingshi fan who has finished the chapter. Remember to remind me if the main text starts work!

Applause, this is the first time I have read a novel from beginning to end~ Hey, I always feel that the author has missed the most important paragraph~~Haha So, let's talk about my evaluation of this novel~ First of all, it can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing this novel, at least based on the research. In fact, it is relatively difficult to write novels that involve history, because no matter the time, historical background, or people's lives, you must pay attention to respecting history when it comes to clothing. Of course, in fact, many novels are written casually, so I admire the author very much for being able to do this. He is a good character. I give it a thumbs up. The most important thing about fan fiction should be to restore the characters. Needless to say, this is very well done. However, I personally think that Xiaoxue is not that weak. She is actually very strong. She resolutely took the magic weapon and threw it at Yuwen. This alone is enough to prove that Xiaoxue is not the kind of girl who has no independent opinions. From my point of view, the author did not spend a lot of pen and ink to describe this shining point of Xiaoxue But I think this is understandable How should I put it? I won't say too much about the good points. Let me talk about the shortcomings in my opinion. Well, it's also my personal opinion. If you think it's wrong, don't bother with it. Why is it understandable? Because overall, this prequel is more like introducing the background. Therefore, time appears a lot, and when I read it, I felt like I was reading a history book. There are relatively few interactions, conflicts, and characterizations of characters. I don't know if this is my first time writing a novel, so I'm a little short on the "storytelling" aspect. (But I find it strange that when I read your words, I don't feel like it's my first time writing a novel) When reading this novel, I feel like I am abbreviating it, like I am telling a story in fewer words. Therefore, the sense of substitution is relatively weak. Haha, I don't know what to say either. But maybe the main story will start telling their adventure story, then that will be fine So, I'm really looking forward to the main story. The hardest thing about writing a novel is conflict Hmm, I thought about it, yes, I think this novel has less conflict Whether it is between the characters or the external forces faced by the characters, But I think the most attractive part of the novel is encountering conflicts and resolving conflicts. Well, keep up the good work. I have said so much, but I still want to say what I want to say. In fact, I also want to discuss it with you. To say the least, I can stand and talk without pain in my back, because I definitely can't write. However, I think if you want to write well, the more you write, the better. Readers' opinions are still more important. So I boldly expressed my thoughts~ Haha, let's stop here~ Bow~

Congratulations on the completion, the author has worked hard~ I'll give you a cup of tea When I saw the last paragraph, I recalled the game. I just want to say, Mr. Yuwen and Xiaoxue, I feel so sorry for you.

Is Princess Yang just such a cannon fodder? Ning Ke is indeed still Ning Ke, with a deep scheming mind~ I wonder what changes will happen in Master Yuwen's marriage to Xiaoxue. . . Old Mrs. Yang, please try your best. I've been busy taking exams lately, and I finally got some relief today.

Wow. What a gorgeous happy event~~ Looking forward to it... I actually burst into tears when I saw the author's update It would be nice to have more. . (Am I very greedy?)