The Last Fairy Tale

The writing is good, but you have to work harder!

The content is very similar to your personality and the tone is more like you.

It's so well written, it's simply superb. When will it be published? Remember to tell me, an absolute rising star and a great writer, Keep up the good work!!

Sure enough, it was written by Brother Ji Shuang! It's just different!!! Bro, I love you! Keep going!

I found a typo in the first paragraph!!!!! The last sentence of paragraph 1: "It is beyond the reach of ordinary people." Should be changed to: "It is beyond the reach of ordinary people." It seems that I didn't lay a good foundation in elementary school!!!!!!!!

Well written! Makes you dizzy!! Ha ha!

I don't know if I don't see it, but I'm shocked when I see it, because I still don't know after seeing it! Am I too stupid? Look carefully, it's a bit bland. But plainness is also beautiful

What and what! ~ Get some fresh ones, okay? But I like it!! Haha, not bad! ~

High school student. Such childish words.

For me, it's a bit long.