Sunshine After the Rain

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This chapter of MS is full, so I gave up. Hahaha, don't miss me.

By the way, I've read this chapter several times.

Haha, I'll come over to collect it again

Wow haha, it's already twelve o'clock. Come on Ayuan, go to sleep haha

I just made a facial mask and couldn't go to bed too early. My thoughts on writing were interrupted again. I remembered that I wanted to write a long review for Grandma, so I came here (haha, I like to make up the word count). What can I say? The name is very nice. Ah Ai is a master of naming. Just like the name of the first article is also good, but the copywriting is so small that it looks troublesome to the eyes. Reading the copy reminded me of another article about picking up a man and bringing him home (an aside, but there are similarities, so I can't help but make comparisons) Okay, the synopsis is so long, I think it would be better if it was shorter. The stars and the moon are shining on the earth I feel like it wouldn't be better to change this sentence to "The stars and the moon are shining on the earth." Well, I'll touch my nose and admit that it's a bit too literal (Anai can also just use 54, just to make up the number of words) "Able to do it without her having any consciousness," After seeing this sentence, I realized that the car was broken down. I always thought she hit someone and made an emergency brake, hahaha "She suddenly realized that it was blood," Well, even if this woman is a strong woman and usually strong, she shouldn't react like that when seeing someone bleeding, right? And he was plotted just now "You have a good life. You don't have to worry about food and clothing." I'm actually quite depressed as to why she said such words. She burst into tears. Her ability to understand is not strong. I still don't understand why the heroine saved him. Well, because when I wrote about the heroine's psychological activities before, I said she was ruthless, so what was it about the hero that impressed her, the will to survive? Don't quite understand Hey, the heroine didn't seem like a person who cared about human life before. How could she suddenly change her doctrine to save him? After reading the first chapter, there are too many descriptions of psychological activities, which seems a bit overwhelming. It feels like the heroine is in a state of madness the whole time. Chapter 2 "If a young man is born into a rich family" Well, how did she know that he came from a wealthy family? Did she save him because she had met him before and knew his origin? Sweat, I feel like my imagination is so rich! "Except for the cleaning staff, few people can enter her room." Why did you throw a stranger into her room? I'm depressed. Since few people could enter her room before, this is a hotel, right? There are so many hotels, so why must they be Throw it into the heroine's room? The heroine doesn't seem like someone who trusts others too much. I feel like Xiang Qing is so silly. I feel sweaty just because of the car thing. In fact, it would be nice to write her as a spoiled rich second generation (who only acts coquettishly in front of her sister)! Chapter 2 (3) Is the male protagonist a nymphomaniac? I've only met the heroine once and you couldn't help but crush her down? Ah, I'm crazy And wouldn't it be better to move this paragraph to the front? (Maybe it's not good, ha, ha, just thinking about it) "A little waiter can be so arrogant" I also feel that she is so arrogant. Could it be that she has a special identity? And her guess feels a bit confusing. There is also a chapter where the male protagonist is not outstanding. . . . Tears Chapter 3 (1) "If you don't eat more, you won't be able to eat ice cream." Xiang Yu said sternly Has the sternness changed? Didn't you still love your sister very much before? "Don't you remember me? Or have you already forgotten about saving me? Fortunately, I still miss you in my heart." Yuanmu, where did this sentence come from? It doesn't seem to match what I said above. I'm dizzy. Chapter 3 (2) I can't understand the dialogue. Because of the previous relationship, I feel that the dialogue is not connected. "Your way of repaying kindness is so strange." I don't understand it at all, what method? I don't understand, and it's not explained in the article. And why were they still in the eating place afterwards? Is the male protagonist standing where he is eating? Ah, my head is big, the location change is unclear. Also, I feel that if it's not a paragraph, it's best to separate it with symbols, because sometimes I can't react after the conversion. Chapter 3 (3) "I also said that I and you don't owe each other anything." Did she say it before? Wasn't it just what she was thinking? Sweat, or did I overlook it? Ah, it seems the review is finished? Overall, I feel that there are too many psychological activities and too few language movements. It seems more complicated. I feel that the description of the female protagonist is pretty good, but the male protagonist is terrible. Haha, the review is completed. Xiao Ai can ignore it, this is just a personal opinion.

Let me collect it first, haha