Drifting Along as a Thousand Trees Bloom and Fade

Newcomer? Support one (I am also a newbie). The article has merits. At least now, I feel that I am still looking forward to the follow-up content. Some suggestions: There must be blank lines between paragraphs. If they are connected together, readers will be dazzled. This is a bloody lesson, we must practice empty practice. Also, I noticed that there is some duplication in the first chapter, that is, the part where they went to the daughter's room and held her hand. Let's change it a little bit. Overall, it's still very good. Harvest it first, and watch it slowly as you fatten it up. I may come to whip you from time to time so that you can change it quickly~ Come on