[Sailor Moon] The Romantic Moonlight Trilogy

Don't like ground guards? But she is the male protagonist, so what can she do? Mamoru Chiba shows that he is the boy he fell in love with for the first time, so he doesn't hate it, but the male god doesn't explain (spreads his hands)

Come on, it looks good please go ahead

It turned out to be a trap...

I just read your article, and I want to say why it is not popular. First of all, it is the title. You directly take Romance in the Moonlight as a better choice than Sailor Moon. Secondly, Sailor Moon is a comic that can only be read in a relatively naive era, right? There is no audience in terms of subject matter. So there won't be many people clicking in, but at least there will still be Sailor Moon fans and curious people like me who might come in. Secondly, when reading a book in Jinjiang, most people will read the copy first, since the copy is about being confused by a dream. Then most readers will also be interested in this confusion and how it comes about. As a result, the heroine knew at the beginning of the story that she had sealed past life memories. In addition, I didn't see anything confusing about dreams or anything like that. So the first chapter extinguished my desire to read further. The article should have a surprising beginning, a solid foreshadowing, a dangerous climax, and a neat ending. For a single chapter, the requirements are roughly the same, This was not done well in the first chapter. As a reader who has read novels for more than ten years, I feel that I don't have much expectations after reading this, so your article only breaks 100 in the first chapter. Moreover, many names appear in the first chapter. Those who have watched Sailor Moon will know the relationship between them, but what about those who have not? Or have you seen it but don't remember it? At least you have to explain it, right? The Gate of Time and Space seems to be the key, but it was carried over easily. To be honest, it took me nearly a minute to recall what it was. So you did a very sloppy job in laying the groundwork. Okay, let's be patient and read on. In the second chapter, we finally started to talk about the mysterious man who appeared in the first chapter, Lucifer. A key word also appeared, the dream cross. It seems that this thing is related to the ownership of the universe. Well, the setting of conquering the world in order to conquer women is still very cute. However, when the minions and the Sailor Senshi are fighting, the cross related to human life that pops up is Xiami? Why, the fallen angels want to find it from humans, but no one said that this thing is only found on earthlings? Or in the soul? Where did such an important thing come from, what is it used for, and why is it missing? Okay, maybe I've only met Boss Lu once, but at least give me some clues for the guys and the readers, right? The universe is so big, and there are things in the universe that are indescribable and unexplainable. Why are they here on earth and among the people on earth? In the soul? Speaking of hair, every victim body? There is a cross in the soul, but I didn't understand it until the third chapter. The fanfic draws on the world structure and setting of the original work. Maybe it's so long ago that I don't remember it. I really can't remember this setting in the original work. But if it is additional fiction, should I give some explanation? The original world setting of Sailor Moon is very thin, and the things in your article are even less explained. So I clicked on Chapters 2 and 3 and slid down again. . . . In Chapter 4, cannon fodder Anna appeared. Until her death, I didn't understand why she came on the scene? Kill Sailor Moon? Love killing? Is it necessary? There are already many words expressing Lucifer's love. Does the jealousy of a woman whose face is not clear serve any purpose in expressing the main line? Generally, the plot of female cannon fodder being jealous has two purposes: First, the cannon fodder is described as beautiful, elegant, intelligent and sexy. At least on the surface, compared to the heroine, he seems to be a character that men would abandon the heroine and defect to. However, the hero and male supporting characters still firmly stand by the heroine without hesitation to show their deep love. But I have no impression of what Anna looks like. Obviously this plot is not used for this. Second, the female cannon fodder expressed her affection through jealousy, but was killed by the male protagonist and male supporting character. Before her death, she revealed major conspiracy clues, showing the male's evil deeds and providing follow-up clues. But she didn't say anything. . . . At least I didn't see what was said. Even the face was blurred and it took up a chapter, and then it came to nothing. . There is no essential difference from the hostage in her hand. Speaking of hostages, as the victims of the "enemy", there were too many in the first two chapters, so you can't describe them well. Now there are only two left, and there is no proper fear or pain. We deeply feel that the sailors are just playing house, and the opponents kidnap dolls. What a great sacrifice for humanity. . . I really didn't see it. . . After seeing this, I basically couldn't stand it anymore. You know, the article didn't say anything until the fourth chapter. . Basically it's over. When I turned to Chapter 5 again, I was completely speechless. Please gain more common sense before writing. First, Lucifer was the name of the Angel of Dawn before his fall. After his fall, he was renamed Lucifer. Second, Lucifer is a biblical character who appeared in Christian culture. He was once one of God's favorite archangels. In other words, if this character really existed, he was also a child who grew up under traditional Christian teachings. Christianity is a very authoritarian religion, and not believing in Christ is a heresy. So when this child said in pain: Palca, the goddess of fate, and their father God Zeus, I completely violated it. It seems that these two mythological systems are not related? Secondly, Chapter 5 explains Lucifer's love. As a fallen angel with relatively supreme taste and class, he has been repeatedly shaped by many comic novels and animations in the hearts of most readers. . Will he fall in love at first sight simply and bloody like a young boy? Can you give me some specific plot? Basically, this is the end of my complaints. If I keep talking, you might give up writing articles. But please believe that I came here with good intentions. At least if it was malicious, I would not spend 3 hours writing this long review. Finally, I still want to say that whether an article is popular or not is actually a matter of luck. A well-written article may not necessarily be popular, and a poorly written article may be popular for no apparent reason. But I feel that as an author, I cannot complain about the fact that the article is even worse than mine. Because, that includes, maybe it's a fluke that I'll be hot if I don't write well. At least you have to write it well. Whether it is hot or not depends on luck. Most writers slowly become popular after working hard to write several articles. It is rare to become popular as soon as they debut. So please try to continue to hone your craft.

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