Seeing Ghosts

The article is too short~ not satisfying~

Well, I really can't stand watching this. The plot is not smooth and the progress is too fast and illogical. The whole story is full of dialogue. It feels like a running account. The concept is not bad.

Bucuobucuo

How to say, The story overall is quite interesting, However, the writing of Agui is too girly, Maybe it's because you just started writing BL, Come on, I hope you can write better articles!

How to say, The story overall is quite interesting, However, the writing of Agui is too girly, Maybe it's because you just started writing BL, Come on, I hope you can write better articles!

In fact, cabbage should be quite pitiful...

Weird... Aha~

Come on! Very nice.

Looks like a good article~

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