Even if our lives are as worthless as grains of sand, how can we accept being so easily erased? How can the bloodlines we're supposedly born with and the status bestowed upon us by heaven decide everything? The storm of the times is upon us. The time has come when we can no longer stay silent! My hands... seize the rights that are mine! Because... happiness can never come again, because... there will be no more peace or beauty...
This is the most legendary chapter in the history of the Oubi Continent, and the tale of Han Xingling, the first person to set an era in motion!
Conspiracy and love, ugliness and beauty, hatred, sorrow, care, joy, hope... none of it can ever obscure that dazzling light, the truth hidden deep within, or the longing to soar through the skies and claim one's own destiny and freedom.
You didn't learn from it at all.
Although this article is not finished, the opening chapter is much better than Moon Night's fan works. Its name is well chosen and very impressive. If I were to write about a conspiracy, I would think that in the end, it would be more unified if we had to do something as a group like in "Water Margin". You see, the experiences of these people in "Holy Legend" were also scattered at the beginning, but they were able to engage in an earth-shaking chaos together for their own purposes. There was no conspiracy at all, and the fight was still quite exciting. The characters in "Three Kingdoms" appear to fight, but the author didn't list all their conversations one by one. Your descriptions are quite precise, and this kind of precision is the result of years of careful observation, which is rare. But I feel that the description of some small parts is unnecessary. When watching the battle, readers are more concerned with the implementation of the strategy itself rather than the background of the strategy. Overly complex and large-scale descriptions are very troublesome and can easily lead to a lack of stamina in the article. The characterization is very vivid, and even a minor character has brilliant and individual dialogues. Therefore, no matter what era it was written in, it is worth learning from the character creation. If it could be completed, I believe it would be a good book.
It's a fantasy historical novel~~I want to say that
Thanks~~~~^-^! If you dig too many holes, you will be too busy. Go to sleep.
Sprinkle flowers for adults~! Come on
Conspiracy counts, revenge counts! ^-^