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[Leave a comment on the article] It's a wonderful article. I couldn't take my eyes out of it after reading the first chapter, but due to time constraints, I only read the first three chapters. The plot of the first three chapters is compact and a good start.

A very interesting article~ So, I decisively collected it...

With the word "fox" in the copy, the image of a sinister and evil man came to mind, and I decisively clicked on the first chapter. The first chapter of this article felt a bit heavy for me. The first four chapters could actually be shortened into three chapters, so that the beginning of the story would be more compact and not so procrastinating. When I read Chapter 5, Pig's Feet and my classmate said a sentence about the school where they were admitted to the high school entrance examination (leaving aside the grammatical problem of this sentence) ["No." Murong Qing didn't even raise his head, "Do you believe I got in with the first place in the city?"], My image of Pig's Feet that was proud and cunning disappeared. Although Pig's Feet is so arrogant, it goes against the image you have created. Even if Murong Qing doesn't say anything, or laughs and doesn't answer, I don't find it that shocking. My fault, I forgot to bring the lightning rod, plug in the lightning rod and continue. Chapter 6 embarrassed me again at the beginning, [He was not nervous that Murong Qing would not do well in the exam, but was afraid that Murong Qing would do well in the exam! There is no way, if Murong Qing does too well in the exam, this treasure will be discovered by others, it feels like a pig's foot is narcissistic through someone else's perspective. Replace the three-pronged lightning rod and continue. Very good, with the appearance of Ximen's family, it feels like things are getting better. [Single word Sanshuiqing] Sorry, what you want to say is "single name and one clear word, Sanshuiqing". You have so many bad words. [There are so many people in China with the same name, not to mention just the same name? A single name is clear, and a given name is clear. The same character is also called the same name? Or I misunderstood, Lin Ziqing's surname is Lin Zi. ["But my company does not specialize in garbage collection. What are your specialties?" Lin Ziqing asked a difficult question. "I am Chinese." Murong Qing said lightly. ] I banged my head on the keyboard. Even if you wanted Pig's Feet's answer to be surprising, you wouldn't be so nonsensical. ["I am Chinese." Murong Qing said lightly. "Oh? Don't tell me that you can play chess, calligraphy and painting?"] Knocking on the keyboard for the second time, what is the inevitable connection between modern Chinese and chess, calligraphy and painting? [When the time comes, you must take good care of him. He is only about ten years old. ] I moistened the monitor with a sip of water. Carry? Pig's feet as belongings? What you probably want to say is "support", support means taking care of, supporting, etc. Wow, I'm sorry. I'm low on humor and high on humor. I really couldn't stand it after I reached Chapter 7. There are too many grammatical errors. If I continue reading, I will become a teacher who corrects homework. This article was probably intended to be an inspirational and romantic article. The story makes people look forward to it, but the character creation and dialogue lack enthusiasm. This has something to do with the experience. But this is my first article. I will pay more attention to my words and sentences in the future, and my writing will get better and better. Come on!

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