"The 'Mortal World' instance has begun. Compassionate saviors, please proceed to the 'Mortal World.'"
"Shi Jin finally found his spring, but spring was fleeting, and soon vanished into the mortal world."
"All things possess a spirit, and life goes on without end."
"All things have a beginning and an end. So do I."
I'm a new novelist, and this is my first attempt, so please be kind! This novel may have some comedy when school drives me crazy. ⚠ The character cards are hand-drawn by me. (I've never studied art; I just tinkered with drawing at school. I may commission art in the future. Every main character will get a hand-drawn character card; it's just a matter of time and order.)
Theme: I hope everyone can find their own spring and live a happy, fulfilling life.
The teacher's writing is very good, but I can't do it anymore. I thought Shi Jin was a very cold character [loading][loading][loading] Why does the message at the back wish me a happy start of school every day? [Heartbroken][Heartbroken][Heartbroken]
Oh no no no no no! The author's drawing skills are so good, I admit I feel dumb🍉, haha, but why does the character have no facial features? 🎉 I have to say that the reading atmosphere in Jinjiang is pretty good. But the page is too messy. I can't change my avatar even if I want to. It seems that I have to use a computer or the web version to change it. It's so troublesome😤 It's okay, it's okay, I wish I could pursue bigger stories Faster and faster! I won't feel heartbroken after eating your article😆
[Orange Candy] Got it🍉🍉 I hope the author will keep updating. I followed an author on Tomato before, and he was also relatively unpopular. I can see from Kuaishou that I supported him in the past, but now my account has been cancelled, so I think I have stopped updating. I also saw Dafa's work on Kuaishou, and then came to Jinjiang to support it. Did Dafa watch Infinite Streaming afterwards? And the sacrifice of the little girl's mother you wrote about here can be borrowed from a book? Just think of me as an advertiser. When I read this article, I didn't feel a particularly strong sense of involvement. Maybe it's because I'm too demanding, or because I'm used to reading books by great people. It's my fault. I won't force newcomers to do anything. The main plot is of course to respect the teacher's own wishes, I have no right to interfere [Green Heart]" Teacher, since you are watching BL. Then, I see that you wrote about the sacrifice part, and maybe the protagonist will also have it in the later period. I recommend a masterpiece to you. I don't know if you have seen it. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. "Erha and His White Cat Master" is so good! Just like his writing style is not gorgeous, but the pictures and suffering are very real. You can learn from it, but I still recommend reading the full text. In fact, his writing style is quite good, but he has no vocabulary, and even some of its words cannot be understood. [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it Really, I'm not saying that falsely. Compared with the work of some new teachers that I have seen before, this work is really outstanding. The key is persistence. The writing style in the front is immature and can be modified, but the overall tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands, and millions of words can only be established by persistence to build this systematic story. I wish you great luck in writing, I'm saving the manuscript now hehe
"Alleys and Alleys" caught the author a big bug~
[Orange Candy] Got it Another male protagonist finally appears! Ahhh! The teacher hopes that you can really write something that can truly convince readers that there really is such a place in the human world. Teacher, is this really your first time writing an article? Hey, I feel like it's well written, really🎉
Teacher, give you some advice: 1. The writing style is very good, and it is not inferior to the great masters (but not all, each great master has a different style and writing style) 2. I have some questions: Will the protagonist Shi Jin's reaction to the sudden time travel be too bland? But I know you may want to give this protagonist a strong character, but... In the first chapter, the protagonist didn't do much, in other words, he didn't have much of a character yet. (But overall your writing is very good. Compared with other newcomers, I at least read yours) "Teacher, the genre of Mugen-ryu is really popular. I think you have potential~" (^o^)/ It's not easy. It's not difficult either. The main thing is that it's exciting, fantasy, and reversal. I hope the teacher can stick to it and let the readers (me) see the day of fire🔥! "This suggestion is purely a personal opinion. I am not forcing the teacher to change his own style and plot settings. Just refer to it. Each author has his own unique style, especially those who want to be popular🔥😘😘"
Come, come, my darling~
[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] Sugar] I got it [orange sugar] I got it [orange sugar] I got it [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl This is my first time writing an article, and I did pretty well!❤️🍉🍉[] Big, big, big, big, must continue to do more! By the way, how many words do you plan to write?
", I saw the crocodile with its huge mouth open,..." This is a big bug for the author~ Oh, I understand... Shi Jin is probably a talent monster! 😍
", The excitement of seeing prey is in the eyes..." This is a big bug for the author~ 🤔🤔How did Shi Jin become so proficient in using magic so quickly🍉🍉(I'm not blaming you, I'm just curious and complaining. It's fine [Three Flower Cat Head])