Also known as "The Wild Geese Fly in Formation"
This is a story about childhood friends.
They meet as children, part ways as teenagers, reunite as young adults, and finally grow old together.
It's a simple, warm, and innocent story. There are no dramatic ups and downs, no earth-shattering vows of love. Their life together is as calm and unhurried as flowing water.
There is a little angst, but mostly it's fun. I don't want to put my own heart or my readers' hearts through the wringer.
If you have the time and inclination, please sit down, make yourself a cup of tea, and watch the sunset and sunrise with them as these two lovers share a steady, lasting love.
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I saw Gu Liang's article in the 523 article package and fell in love with it, so I ran to JJ to have sex with her. Does Guliang accept GD? The full text is smooth and long, and the plot setting is very natural. There is nothing abrupt or blunt. It can be seen that Guliang is very, very serious in writing the article. As a reader, I am honored and lucky to read such an article. Thank you. Secondly, the relationship between the two people is really worthy of envy. I think that with Minghui's persistence and Ayao's clear attitude later, they can have a bright future! It doesn't matter whether you are of the same or opposite sex, love can never be enough. Many people like to say that love is above all else. But often, love is always wasted in the daily necessities of daily life. By the time they wake up, nothing can be undone. It's better to be prepared from the beginning. Minghui's parents were not wrong. It was their education that created the independent and strong Minghui. This allowed him to accumulate what he needed in seven years, and to have no worries after meeting A Yao again. But things have to be divided into two. Good and bad. In the past twenty years, misunderstandings and everything will definitely turn into nothing with the efforts of both parties. After all, parents and children are always in constant contact! The part about grandma's death was written in the middle, and it tortured me to death!!!!!! Well, not much for now. Maybe go back and read it again and give a longer review! Also, Gu Liang, where's the extra story you agreed on?????? I have to cash it in
I haven't read the article since I received it. I opened it today and found the progress of the article: Completed. Uh-huh~ It's so cool to read the finished article~!!! First of all, give the author a thumbs up for this speed!!! Reading the first few pictures of the article, I feel that Minghui is so pitiful. His parents always leave him at home without telling him. He only knows how to study, study and study every day... Maybe because I like that no matter what his family background is or what the situation around him is, he can be a strong male protagonist. Although it may be because Minghui is still young, but~... So, in the front, I don't like Minghui. But I like Yao very much, he is lively and naughty, he feels like Xiaoshou. Haha, but such a Xiaoshou should have a very calm and slightly sinister attack to be harmonious~? However, the lively and cute Ah Yao has broken into Minghui's world and will bring a new color to Minghui's life. I firmly believe it! To summarize the first few pictures~ the story is a bit flat, with no ups and downs. The dialogue handling is somewhat immature. But it's very loving, I think Ah Yao and Ming Hui are starting to develop into an aggressive and supportive relationship little by little!!! Oh ho ho~~~~Excited! Seven years later, sure enough, Ah Yao and Ah Hui have matured day by day, and Ming Hui has gradually become more handsome~! Aura, aura and so on~~~It's so powerful! However, Ah Yao was pitiful this time... Look at this, he said to the mirror, "Mom, Ah Hui, I am 19 years old this year." I feel so distressed... The further I go, the more I feel that even though they both have girlfriends, I can still feel the intimacy between the two from the lines. My eyes are full of little red hearts when I read it. Even if it is a little worried and hurt, it still does not destroy the love and warmth of the article~~~! Also, it can be seen that the author's writing is getting better and better, and the dialogue is handled very well and naturally~ It doesn't feel awkward anymore!!! Alas~! Because I have to be busy doing homework, I haven't finished reading it yet. I will definitely finish it when I have time! This article makes me feel relaxed when I read it. I will be happy and sad as Ah Yao is happy. Well, this article touched me! Does the girl still write articles? Looking forward to~ Finally. Do you love the author~~~~~?
The writing is concise and clearly points out the direction of the story, which is good. This opening chapter gives people a leisurely atmosphere, The scenery in the opening chapter is well described. The author's writing style is quite good, but there are areas where the character's personality could be improved. Ming Hui's character is mature, and sometimes the description seems a little one-sided and deliberate. It's cute because it's warm and bland, but maybe I didn't read the whole story, and I always felt that it was a bit unattractive. All in all, the author's writing style is quite good. But you can pay more attention to the description of the characters and the description of the text. Please keep up the good work, author.
The relationship between the two is beautiful, but it's a pity that BG in BL stories is always tragic.
140,000 Words, a little long, I took it back and read it slowly, but the beginning is very beautiful, it feels like a faded old photo, with a faint feeling of memories, I like it very much
This is the first narration I've read since I was a child. It was very fresh when I first saw it. Looking at the children (Xiao Minghui and Xiao Yao) written by the author, I felt that I suddenly returned to my childhood. Maybe it was because I was just like Minghui when I was a child, so I can easily resonate with his psychology, and there are many children like A Yao around me. Ahem, of course I don't have lily... Under the author's step-by-step preparation, Minghui's feelings for Ayao sprouted little by little, and the stories were all about trivial things in life, but it was these trivial things that laid the foundation of Minghui's feelings for Ayao. To A Yao, he can show his childish side without any reservation, without having to act like a teenager to others. Well, the author's writing style is my favorite type. The narrative is simple and a few words can describe the psychological emotions or facial expressions of the characters. It is not procrastinating or lengthy. This kind of writing makes readers read smoothly and refreshingly. That's what good writing is, it doesn't need long and gorgeous rhetoric. Back to business. I have infinite love for Minghui. From the very beginning, Ayao felt that he was a person who needed pampering, and Minghui was the one who could protect him, give him space, allow him freedom, and indulge his pampering. (Hmm, isn't that too convoluted?) Ming Hui, because of his family background, is destined not to have a happy childhood like most ordinary children. Ayao was the only ray of sunshine that shone into his heart during his childhood. A Yao's childishness is complemented by Minghui's mature temperament, protecting and condoning him. So when I saw the little bits and pieces of Ayao Minghui on the way to school and in the school cafeteria, I felt very warm. Beautiful brotherly love and beautiful childhood feelings! Well, I don't know if anyone is like me. Regarding the supporting characters that have appeared so far... I am very impressed with Tao Yuting, who has only appeared twice... Is it because she was the first to discover Minghui's feelings for Ayao, and her very open-minded thinking at the time impressed me? Originally, I thought she would make a big fuss, making it known to everyone on campus... (This should be more in line with her character of a rich girl who wants to save face), but children are children after all (perhaps Tao Yuting has a rotten girl factor). Above, I just want to say that as a writer, the author has successfully created every character in the novel (at least up to this point, I haven't finished reading it yet... I don't know if there will be any accidents...). Every person in her novel, regardless of the protagonist or supporting role, has left a deep impression on me as a reader. The brushstrokes are simple yet profound. He can narrate the small things in ordinary life in a warm and complete way, and the narration about their childhood moved my heart even more. It is the kind of ignorance and youthful feelings. They are simple, so there is no deception. The two children are the most innocent. Regarding the time jump, I feel it's a bit rushed. When I was a child, Minghui's inner thoughts were more visually described, but when I grew up, the focus seemed to be on A Yao... Well, this is the advantage of third-person description, it can describe everyone's psychology very well. Ayao's awkwardness is reflected... Excited! Lele may be an "obstacle" in their future relationship, because they have their mother's last words in front of them. Ming Hui has turned into a sinister person... I like this change>.<Only a sinister attack can subdue the awkward hoho The reason why the review is called "Two Children Are the Best" is because I like their pure feelings when they were young, without external interference, because once they mature and enter society, they will always have to face many things and many people. Therefore, I would like to make this comment to commemorate the most innocent and beautiful childhood years they lost. Youth is so precious, and two children are the most precious.
Ha ha!! Is this your first BL article? I just read your Jiuwei's articles and I saw your "Your Glory" chicken jelly!! This article of yours is my type of cuteness!!
I watched it on Zhaji, so it was inconvenient to leave a message, and it was finished when I was watching it, so I had to just pack it up and collect it! I like the freshness of your writing and the clean, warm and happy feeling of the story. Come on, author!!