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Forensic examiner Lin Mei transmigrates into the body of a minister's daughter convicted of a crime and is thrown into the coroner's office from the start.
The good news: Her expertise is a perfect fit.
The good news: Whenever she touches something belonging to a dead person, she can see fragments of their final moments.
The bad news: Using her golden finger gives her a headache.
The even worse news: She can't tell anyone. If she does, they'll just think she's crazy.
The first time she touched a victim's earring, she saw the killer fighting with someone.
The second time she touched a victim's hairpin, she saw the jade pendant at the killer's waist.
By the time the third body arrived, the senior coroners in the office had finally realized something was off. This girl's crime-solving speed was practically supernatural.
Only Lin Mei knew that her visions were low-resolution.
The real skill came from her own hands.
Check the corpse's temperature to estimate the time of death.
Check the pupils to determine the type of poisoning.
Examine the wounds to identify the murder weapon.
The old coroners in the office all marveled, "The young are formidable. She's a natural-born forensic prodigy."
The first time the Investigating Censor Shen Yu met her, he said coldly, "What kind of conduct is it for a minister's daughter to touch corpses?"
Three months later, he pushed an unidentified corpse into her arms. "Examine it."
From partners on official cases, the two became confidants who would share life and death,
confronting undercurrents at court, exposing layer upon layer of fabricated evidence, and seeking justice for those wrongly accused.
They met in the mire and survived together in the darkness.
Theme: Even mired in the mud of her era, a woman can still help hold up a collapsing world.
It's time to read a few more chapters. I originally thought Wang Yushi was a boss behind the scenes, but I still can't believe that he will fall so soon. The pace of these five chapters is so fast. Zhou Man's case and the Lin family's case have made major progress. I don't have a clue about the people behind the scenes, so I'm just waiting for the author to decipher the secrets. There is also Wang Yushi's wife, who I guess has a big role, and this cousin. Although she may have nothing wrong with her, I still remain skeptical about such a sudden appearance after a long time! Big boost to the author, I feel like you write each chapter better than the last. These chapters, whether they are fighting scenes or emotional description scenes, are very graphic💪
I read the five chapters again before going to bed. There is a case on both sides, and one of them should be a serial case. Big, I think the narrative rhythm and method of these five chapters are much better than the first five chapters. At the beginning, sometimes I felt that some places were a bit stiff, but now I feel that the progress is very natural and the narrative is much more coherent. I always feel that Mr. Su is a bit strange. Of course, Lin Lin does not completely believe it. Let's see what the mystery is in the end. This court is really strange and strange, and the male protagonist is not easy. Congee Congee is so big, don't worry about it because few people will read it. I hope writing is something that can make you happy. When writing words, you can follow the characters in the text to feel their joys, sorrows, and sorrows, which will also add color to our own lives. Everything is rarely smooth sailing at the beginning, and if you persist, you will always have a different scenery.
The author of Porridge is great. I just read 5 chapters of this detective novel. The current progress is that the first Su Wan case has just been concluded. I am not qualified to make any suggestions. I just have two small thoughts that I want to share with you. First, I think there is a possibility to improve the work so that more people can see it. Be sure to make the tags of the article more comprehensive. For example, this article, I think its biggest feature is that it definitely contains a plot of suspense and reasoning, but the tags of the article cannot be seen. When many people are looking for articles, they look at them through tags. For example, I want to read Gong Douwen, or I want to read suspense and reasoning articles. It searches based on this. So I think you can compare all the tags in Jinjiang and see which tags are consistent. You can add all the tags that match. You can even add the content you want to add in other columns. For example, the meaning of "overturning the case" is to use tags as much as possible to enrich the framework of the article, so that more people can collect it. Then I think the second point is from the first small case I saw. Personally, I think the development of the plot is very smooth, and the pace is neither too fast nor too slow, and it is logical to find the murderer. I haven't read the back yet, and the author's length says it's only about 300,000 words, so I want to know if this article is about the protagonist resolving the case for his family, or is he solving other small cases while resolving the case, such as the first one, which is similar to the case of jealousy murder. I think if it is the latter, can it be reflected in the catalog at the end of each small case? This way, the reader can see more clearly. For example, if the murderer of the first case is revealed in the fourth chapter, then in the table of contents of the fourth chapter, you can see the words "the first case is completed," or the end of the murder case. Personally, I think this can make people clearly see the text of the article, and everyone may see it more clearly. Of course, if it is about resolving the case for the family, it can be ignored. Of course, these are some of my own ideas, and they are not very mature. If the author doesn't approve, don't bother with them. One family's opinion is their own opinion.
Damn, I think the reason why you can't write it down is because it's too elaborate from point to line and then to the meeting. Starting from the Lin family's case, and extending to now, you worry that you may not be able to take it back in the end. There are too many branches, so I can only write it like this first. Of course, this is all my guess. In fact, I think that if a case arises, just investigate each one. There is no need to be particularly obsessed with connecting the cases and artificially implicating them. I don't know if this will help you. Anyway, several small cases that have appeared now are all related to each other. If you can't continue writing, it is also good to write one case at a time. P. S., Why can't Duan Pinghui see it?
"Let's see if we can find Prince He Jing..." This is a big bug for the author~ Damn, I forgot, did you mention Prince Jing's Mansion?
"Shen Yu heard this and reached out to take Su..." This is a big bug for the author~ This section is repeated.
"If you wear it to the emperor," it will be a big bug for the author ~
"She saw it in the memory fragment..." This is a big bug for the author~ Her home?
Lin Lin's character is so three-dimensional when he finds himself pushed in front of others. He is not afraid of anything. A new case has appeared. This case is very strange. I have never seen it before. I don't know if there is such a medicine that can have such an effect. Moreover, the emperor is also an unfathomable person. I feel that no one can believe it casually. Also, there are a lot of names in this chapter that seem to be wrong. I have to catch a lot of bugs~
"Come on, everyone," give the author a big worm~