
[Before Dawn] [Qi Liu] Waking from a Dream
[黎明之前][齐刘]如梦方醒
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 13k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
10Chapters
56Favorites
2.1kClicks per chapter
14Comments
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After being tortured to death by another fan, I finally found comfort. Silently masturbate yourself
It's me who is dark, HE is good!
Why is this article so sweet that I always feel like there is some conspiracy... Is Director Qi also an undercover agent...
I also want to ask... Where is Rourou? When will the rest of the 100 questions be made up~
The story about the game is a must! ! ! !
Been watching it off and on for a month. I have to say that you are really calm, but you haven't told me the ending yet. Look at me, a conceited person like me. It's too difficult for me to write a review for someone who writes better than me. XD Just kidding, but to be honest, I never thought you could write so well. I haven't written a review just because I don't know where to start. It's like a table full of Chinese people is suddenly pushed to you, and you will be amazed in your heart. However, although the daily meals on the home table are delicious, it is difficult for anyone to write an article and praise them. This metaphor is probably not very appropriate. Weiwen's Manchu-Han banquet is not better than home-cooked food. In writing, including music, dance and other arts, the exquisite and colorful aspects are often not moving. For example, a martial artist doing more than a dozen somersaults in a row is rare, but it may not be as moving as a famous actress's glance. If you write about Qi Peilin and Liu Xinjie on the eve of liberation, how they swore to each other and never gave up, how they went to the Qing Pond, and how they saw death as if they were home. If both of them died, then write about how they both passed through the well of reincarnation on Naihe Bridge and wandered back again. If you want to torture, write about one of them who happened to not die and lived in endless pain from then on (purely fictitious, if it is similar to any GN's work, it is a coincidence). If you really wrote it like this, it would be colorful, but it would fall into the category of a martial artist who performs more than a dozen somersaults. The best thing about writing is that it is plain and undercurrent. Smoke, Spring Festival couplets, snow on the coat. It's so natural, it seems like it should be like this, it just happened, you are just documenting it. The first difficulty is thinking. What's more, so many details can no longer be thought of just by thinking, they must sink in with the whole heart. The second difficulty is writing. The perspective of the whole article is very well grasped and runs freely, making the picture very strong. The psychological descriptions are interspersed very appropriately, making people feel like they are watching the sequel to Dawn, with not only pictures but also narration in the ears. I sprayed it several times while watching it. Probably because I am not a fujoshi after all. In fact, why not write more CJ? There are only cigarettes, Spring Festival couplets, brats and little bastards, so the portion is quite enough. Each chapter has a very exciting part. My favorite is at the beginning of the article, when Liu Xinjie wakes up from his dream and makes a trembling phone call. Qi Peilin was probably tossing and turning at that time? Or sitting on the edge of the bed in a daze? Liu Xinjie went to see him, and he calmly accepted the cigarette from Liu Xinjie. But then Captain Li smiled at Xinjie and said, "Lao Qi like you has no one to take care of you, so he stays in the house pitifully all day long." In the middle of the night, we fall into a dream at the same time. Who in the two places is dreaming about the other? In these chapters, the people from these two places who dreamed of each other are finally in the same room. Waiting for your ending.
Guliang, I love your writing style! ! Below, is there any! !
Do you dare to post it all at once?
Very well written. Better than mine
I don't know what will happen in the future? Why do I always feel uneasy? Illusion, it must be an illusion