[Hikaru No Go] We Passed Each Other By [Sai BG]
[棋魂]我们，擦肩而过[佐为BG]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
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4kClicks per chapter
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Not great, a bit broken!
Okay, I read the article. To be honest, it's not a very good article. The story in the full text is rather cliche, and I don't see any new ideas. Zuo Wei's character is not outstanding enough. To be precise, he is walking on the edge of collapse. The emotional transition is a bit strange. It is not easy to write a short story well. After all, in just a few thousand words, it takes the author's capable writing style to explain the entire story and the character of the mission. So that's it. I don't know if the author will be sad, but I said everything I wanted to say. I hope the author will continue to work hard
Okay, I read the article. To be honest, it's not a very good article. The story in the full text is rather cliche, and I don't see any new ideas. Zuo Wei's character is not outstanding enough. To be precise, he is walking on the edge of collapse. The emotional transition is a bit strange. It is not easy to write a short story well. After all, in just a few thousand words, it takes the author's capable writing style to explain the entire story and the character of the mission. So that's it. I don't know if the author will be sad, but I said everything I wanted to say. I hope the author will continue to work hard