The whole story is locked for a major revision.
I made you a promise, and my memories are full of deep affection.
Once a beauty turns to bones, even eternity comes to nothing.
The moon sets and the stars fade; the long song still rages.
I wield a three-foot blade of snow and bring down three thousand splendors.
When I look back, my old friend is already a stranger at the edge of the world.
In this vast martial world, who will decide its fate?
A chivalrous heart? A tender soul? She no longer cares to guess.
She'll wait until she's seen every wonder, then stand shoulder to shoulder and admire the green mountains and flowing streams.
Quite like it. Come on, keep it up~ I'll save it first and watch it later~
Okay... I'll just see it here.
Well, Gongzi's writing is wrong. In fact, I like wedges very much... But in the later chapters, I know that the heroine is the heroine in wedges, but I always feel that there is no connection. This made my expectations after watching wedges plummet. In terms of plot, I feel that there are few plots and it is not particularly coherent. In terms of description, I actually don't feel that there is too much description, but it just gives people the feeling that it hinders the development of the plot. It seems that a plot has not been explained clearly, and then with a twist of the pen, as soon as the description is finished, the plot is brought down from Jiuchuan... Personally... Don't get too entangled in this.
Hmm... It's a bit slow to get to the topic... I didn't see any highlights in the first few chapters... I mean the highlights of the plot... But Young Master's writing style is good, fresh and refreshing with a touch of gorgeousness... Ho ho... Come on... I'm the tail. (Gently, I left. I waved my sleeves and didn't take away a single cloud...)
Is it written in the first or third person? ? The first sentence uses her, and the second sentence suddenly becomes me-_-||
Come on, I'm optimistic about you
Come on, Xiao Yi. Don't get entangled. It's very well written!
Come on~ Very good~
Great writing! ! ! ! ! ! ~
Sprinkle flowers, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Come on, more wow, come on more wow...
Xiao Yi's writing is so good…! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Quite like it. Come on, keep it up~ I'll save it first and watch it later~
Okay... I'll just see it here. Well, Gongzi's writing is wrong. In fact, I like wedges very much... But in the later chapters, I know that the heroine is the heroine in wedges, but I always feel that there is no connection. This made my expectations after watching wedges plummet. In terms of plot, I feel that there are few plots and it is not particularly coherent. In terms of description, I actually don't feel that there is too much description, but it just gives people the feeling that it hinders the development of the plot. It seems that a plot has not been explained clearly, and then with a twist of the pen, as soon as the description is finished, the plot is brought down from Jiuchuan... Personally... Don't get too entangled in this. Hmm... It's a bit slow to get to the topic... I didn't see any highlights in the first few chapters... I mean the highlights of the plot... But Young Master's writing style is good, fresh and refreshing with a touch of gorgeousness... Ho ho... Come on... I'm the tail. (Gently, I left. I waved my sleeves and didn't take away a single cloud...)