[Anime Crossover] A Mere Ripple

0.0 Congratulations on finishing the article... Will there be another pit?

The last one is generally good, and the heroine's abilities have also become stronger (but it's still worse than the blue boss... It's obvious that the author's own mother has given you so many cheats, but you still 'lose' to the characters in the plot... Sigh.) But what I am a little dissatisfied with is the part about Hell Girl. How could the heroine be dragged into hell by Hell Girl if she is the God of Death? Hell Girl is not very capable (since the heroine is of course a little fragile, but she can't lose to her) ! ), Plus the two are similar to the 'Reaper' responsible for different areas, so both sides should have inviolable restrictions (otherwise Hell Girl would have been killed by the Deaths early in the morning, even if she was pulling the bad guy), it's impossible Hell Girl will drag the heroine who is already the God of Death to go to hell (she wants to die! Since she is against the God of Death!), So when I saw that part, I felt that the author did not arrange it well. Although the author has finished the work, it feels like there are many plots that have not yet begun. For example, Death Note, There are other Pokemon in other worlds that have not been recovered (did the author forget = =||). In fact, the author's writing is good, otherwise I wouldn't have bought all the VIP chapters in one go. The lack of messages may be due to poor arrangements or because the girl worked hard alone and did not have much contact with the plot characters (or plot), so there are few Please leave a message. Many plot characters could actually use more drama (outside of the plot), such as: The little sister controls the older brother - Huang Subaru. The last two volumes were hidden by the author, and there is no "brother-sister love" of love. 27 Before he met the Demon King - for the heroine who would not bully or look at him with a "waste" look and who was the first to reach out to him, as well as the electronic music club, who were important "partners" to him in a certain sense, but he couldn't see it. It doesn't matter how much he paid attention to it (such as Ishikawa's disappearance, the heroine's mission or injury, and other club interactions did not appear - maybe the author forgot to write about him = =||). However, overall the style and content of the article are good (except that the heroine's ability has become weaker among the plot characters, which is unacceptable). I hope to continue working hard in the next article. PS: Give me more extras, preferably daily extras. PPS: This Blue BOSS extra is very awesome~~

Think about it, if you want to complain, you should complain in every chapter... This way you can get more points... Xiao Jing said that instead of living under your control, it would be better to disappear... Well, this is talking about myself... Doesn't it include those worlds monitored by the Space-Time Administration? If it is included... How can you make people A, B, C, etc. In the world feel embarrassed because of your wanton actions, which caused the world to collapse and lead to an inexplicable demise... Well, there are not just a few people you care about in those worlds... If other people living well in that world knew that you caused the collapse of time and space and the death of the world in order to break fate... Xiaojing, you would be regarded as the ultimate BOSS╮(╯▽╰)╭

CLAMP university department? ? ? I know there must be Yuko, Syaoran, Sakura and Kurogang Fai, right? ! ! =3=The boss is so good, he really wrote a side story about Ichigo, but, why do I think it was written from Aizen's point of view? ! Another: I will never admit it again, Aizen in this chapter also moved me, absolutely! ! !

... Boss, do you think I will admit to you that Aizen in this chapter moved me for a second? NO, I won't admit it. Look at the sky. . . In fact, it's quite right. . . Delusion to rely on personal power to change the trajectory of destiny. . . Really, it's hard. You see Like Kuro Rido and Fei Wang, they just wanted Yuko to be resurrected, but what happened? After dragging so many people into the water, time and space collapsed. In the end, Yuko still had to clean up her hands, and then what should have disappeared disappeared... Blake felt remorse and became a contract violator. He saw White Alice in Abyss and got the opportunity to travel back in time. The result? Even the last owner died tragically... Edward just wanted his mother to be resurrected and feel her warmth again, but later on, what he lost never came back. As a price, he also lost his left hand, right leg and Al's body... Look at the sky. Therefore, if you want to go back in time and change history, most of the time, it is not as easy as rebirth novels...

Well, the ending is very happy... Sprinkle flowers Well, actually, the Space-Time Management Bureau feels like the current government department to me - formulating rules and maintaining rules╮(╯▽╰)╭ So the idea of "defeating the Space-Time Administration" is completely unnecessary... Just like a real high-ranking official, as long as your ability reaches that level, you can make rules and make people who are weaker than you live under the rules you set... Well, at that time, the "Space-Time Administration" will be your subordinate department ╮(╯▽╰)╭

Congratulations on the completion~ Sure enough, it's the blue BOSS~the handsome one~~

Phew~ Healing hunter...

=. =Well, actually I have always been wondering why Itachi is vomiting his bento now (=v=I am the god of plot prediction, oh yeah I was ecstatic when I saw, "It's basically just a quick lunch" Then, seeing that shit again, "But I really don't dare to challenge killing Aizen, so I'm just talking about it." I just want to express my thoughts: ... The boss is a bad guy, absolutely! ! ! Above. Also, boss, when I first saw Liao Liao, I went there because of Jing's status as a passerby, so from the beginning, I never thought that Jing would have CP... TAT boss, you broke my fantasy...

=V=Since everyone has responded, I will make up for the points.