[Fairy Tail] [Natsu and Gray] Loss
[妖精的尾巴][夏灰]丧失
- Status
- Unknown
- Length
- 775k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
328Chapters
806Favorites
3Nutrient gifts
3.2kClicks per chapter
563Comments
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The last time was 2012 - now 2014, it has been two years. Speaking of which, Natsu and Gray's CP was the most difficult to write... As a fire dragon who is a mess except for his fighting acumen, and an ice mage who is occasionally normal and mostly abnormal... It is really impossible to find out what it feels like to be in love... But the two of them are indeed the most perfect CP. Looking forward to a big comeback.
Dad, why did you abandon the trap? It made me lose my appetite.
Came to remind me that it's been almost a year - -
Such a great article... The author is awesome~~Please come back!!! At least fill in the hole before leaving... Please!!!!! Come back...
Dear author, are you preparing for... A trap? Naidu's code is 81w+, can Nai really bear to be cheated? Can Nai really bear it? QAQ
Helpless. . . It's been half a year. . . Doesn't it mean that it won't be cheated? . . Or did you say it was abandoned = =? It's very interesting, keep writing. .
By the way... I must have forgotten this article... Update soon...
I can't talk about opinions and suggestions, let's just talk about it... Actually... Don't you think the psychological description is a bit too much? In fact, it doesn't matter. It mainly depends on what type of article you want to write. If it is a relatively relaxed article, you can have more scenery descriptions. If there are too many psychological descriptions, some readers will not finish it. You can actually lay the groundwork by using some contrasting techniques. If you are writing a connotative article, you can leave a little more blank space for readers to imagine. You don't need to bury the foreshadowing too deeply. If possible, the interaction between Xia Hui should be more natural... I'm not saying it's unnatural now, it just feels more and more heavy. Also, if it's an original character, it's worth spending some space to enrich the character's image. I understand that you want to write a good article seriously. Loss in my heart is beyond the existence of fan fiction. Thank you very much for writing such a good article. Please take your time, Xuexue is here waiting for you!
As expected, there are no updates today. Dear New Year's Day, please do well~ Xuexue's second reminder
I specifically emphasized the left and right hands, and I guess the left hand is the real one. . . Doesn't it mean that the left hand is the position of the heart (⊙_⊙)?