I'm Watching You

It is indeed an anticlimactic story. The first part is novel and interesting, humorous and gloomy. All parties have spent their efforts to lay out a big game of chess, thinking that everyone's goal is to dominate the entire wizarding world. In the end, in the last 10 chapters of God's Expansion, all the chess pieces have given up, and they have the courage to pursue love. Love is really the greatest power! Although it is suspected of being unfinished, for the sake of the first hundred chapters, I still confess that my brain is really big!

I saw that many readers said that the plot was confusing at the end. Although it has been a long time, Xiaofan still wanted to come and say sorry to everyone. In fact, in terms of the setting of this article, I originally planned to have 60-800,000 words, and there will be 1-2 volumes after the fourth volume. But you can feel it when you read what the author has to say. From the end of 2010 to the end of 2011, I encountered big problems in real life... I was about to graduate at that time. Growing up, I had always been considered someone else's kid in the neighborhood's eyes. When I was about to graduate, I signed up for a good employer based on my ability. It's the time when young people are in high spirits. But the society slapped me hard, and slapped me again... First, the position I signed for was taken by someone else. I don't know what happened at that time. Although I finally got it, I still got it, but... I can only hehe. I was almost forced to be someone's love interest. Of course, this is all my problem, and readers really shouldn't have to foot the bill. I also like to follow articles. Maybe it's because everyone has different personalities. I can't accept the author's random cheating of articles. Once I see this kind of article, I will feel depressed and feel lost for many days. Therefore, although most of the auxiliary plots were cut, leaving only plots related to the main plot, which made many plots unclear and many foreshadowings unexplained in the final reading... I still finished it with stumbling steps. I'm really sorry for this. Since 2011, I have hardly dared to open my author backend, let alone read the comments below this article. I always feel like I have let down my friends who really accompanied me to slowly finish writing this article... I also tried to flesh out the later plot, but unfortunately, I have traveled to many places in the past few years, and I have changed my notebook several times, and the early outlines can no longer be found. The memory of this article has already... It can be said that there are many foreshadowings in the article that even I, the author, may not be able to explain clearly... Time is really terrible. I just reread this article. Every time I read a chapter, what I saw was not the plot, but myself typing in front of the computer at that time. From being high-spirited to now, my mentality is old. Just like the feeling of Lydia in the article, "In a daze, Lydia remembered their past days, the girls who played with each other, the best friends who teased each other, the arrogant and awkward nobles, the lazy and smiling boy... The memory was so vivid and bright in the past, but at this moment, it gradually faded, and it was broken as if from the previous life..." After writing so much, I actually don't know what I want to say. Maybe I just feel too uncomfortable and want to say something... Finally, I would like to thank my editor. During my most difficult time, if she hadn't kept giving lists and semi-forcedly dragging me to update with lists, I might not have been able to retain even the last bit of persistence in not cheating... Finally, Xiao Fan would like to sincerely say sorry to the readers who persisted with this article until the end, and for disappointing everyone...

In fact, I really don't want to admit it. I want to give it a negative score because I didn't understand the ending at all. At least by the end, I didn't know who was the bad guy and who was the policeman. Why does the professor love the heroine? The heroine is really unlikable, she is stupid but she feels like Sherlock Holmes. Okay, I have to admit that the ending is really bad. I guess the author can't continue writing, so he should just finish it. Of course, it's also possible that multiple time-travelers have always been my highlight. At least from what I've seen, it feels like so many time-travelers can't tell who the protagonist is.

- - I think... V article is basically out of touch with the previous article... Sensen feels that it is more tragic after understanding it... I actually bought something that I don't understand... Actually...

I have no idea what you are writing about

It looks funny from the front, but then it looks like an inexplicable farce from the back? (The key is that it's still very messy) And why did the professor fall in love with Lydia? It seems that there is no sign at all, it seems that you like it just for the sake of liking it. Even if the professor saw the time traveler's memory and escaped Dumbledore's control by pretending to like Lily, can't he secretly like other girls during this period? It's really baffling to say. Dumbledore suddenly gave up the resurrection technique. It felt like a middle-aged man suddenly became normal in an instant. Then, the food chain was broken, and then it ended. . . . Nima, what on earth are you trying to say…I'm speechless…

Looking for some smoke!! It's really ugly and painful. Actually, I wanted to watch sex with the professor, but in the end, there wasn't even any minced meat.

I didn't want to sound so vicious, maybe it's just because I'm not very intelligent and can't understand. However, I always feel that compared to the initial part, the quality dropped drastically after V. There were too many foreshadowings, and the final explanation always felt like it wasn't thorough enough. This is the first time I regretted buying V... That's it

This is my first V article that I have fully bought, but I have to say that maybe there is a problem with my understanding, or maybe there are too many foreshadowings. There are many parts that I don't understand in the whole article. It's true that group travel is very confusing. . . . Or maybe you want to construct a story where a group of people think they know the direction of events and want to reverse the outcome of HP on their own, but they end up in chaos because of each other's wings. . . . What confuses me the most is when did the professor and the heroine get along? They seemed to get along all of a sudden. They skipped the second grade. There was little relationship development in the third grade. During the summer vacation of the third grade, the heroine proposed suddenly. The fourth-year professor seemed to have suddenly fallen in love with the heroine. Didn't he say that the professor had given her something that she had forgotten all about? There was no explanation of when he gave it to her or how he gave it to her. Are you planning to write a side story? There is also Pansy and Draco, who are heavily featured in this article, but there is no clear explanation in the end. The last CP of Blaise, who was originally very popular, is also ridiculous. I hope there will be some explanations. Although I don't want to admit it, it is really a bit unfinished. . . However, I still like this article very much. The overall feeling is that you tried to construct a large article structure, but in the context of group time travel, you did not express what you wanted to express very well. I can feel the meaning you want to say, but I can't explain it clearly in the article. For example, if I want to tell this story to others, I can't express the main idea. I don't know if you can understand what I mean. . . This article is really an excellent work. At least it can break out of the inherent framework of HP and build a different kind of HP. It gives me a refreshing feeling. I hope the author can improve this excellent story in the future. I will always support you.

Actually… Finally, I want to say that the more I read, the less I understand…