
[Sasuke X Naruto] Overstay
[佐鸣]Overstay
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 25k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
7Chapters
178Favorites
10.0Score
10Nutrient gifts
2.3kClicks per chapter
20Comments
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A very divine article. It grows smoothly and sadly, depressively and collapses. I don't know what to say, I was deeply shocked.
I haven't forgotten this article in ten years. My favorite among all the fanfics.
Together, two souls in one body are together, even if they are lying to themselves.
It feels like it is no longer a simple fan work. I read it when I was very young. I only read it once but I still remember it until now. I opened the first page and saw "He works at nine o'clock every day..." "Serving as a soldier..." The memory revived and automatically picked up the topic. The writing is really magical. It is a very ordinary read and it makes my nose sore and shed tears. I thank the author for giving me such an experience.
It is a well-written article, full of vitality. When you read it, you feel like you are feeling your pulse. There is blood flowing slowly in it. There are some chaotic timelines that reveal a crazy and messy beauty. It is very consistent with the character background and the characteristics of the times set by the author. He is the main perspective throughout the article, but it seems that people can't help but take it in, as if they are having a conversation with him, and a full and independent individual is narrated from the language.
This is an article with great staying power. I first read it secretly in class with my mobile phone in my senior year of high school. Because the memories and reality were intertwined at different times, I couldn't make sense of it clearly. After reading it, my chest felt very tight. I later watched it about six or seven times, and it influenced every essay I took during my late senior year of high school. . I can't forget that kind of love. "His eyes are flowing and solidified blue seas" this kind of charming narrative made me fall in love. Naruto's split personality (I personally understand it this way) seems natural and sad under this kind of story layout. Overstay is truly the pinnacle of Sa Ming's novels I've read. Zuo Ming is only one bigger than L.
Oh, so beautiful, beautiful TUT I feel that this article already has an amazing feeling, or I have never seen such a beautiful article before. Many words are like pictures... With their own color Mixed with topics such as faith, or violent and bloody life... It's really great to pull the clothes of an adult, very reassuring, very peaceful, that's how it feels It would be a good idea to write an original article with this feeling... So if adults want to write original articles in the future, they will also express their support for TVT
I watched it at Zuoming Bar and ran over. I was in tears. Although there are only seven short chapters, from the beginning I had the illusion that I was watching a movie, and my mind kept changing the pictures along with the words. When I saw the end, I could only cry and say in my heart that this was the happiest ending for them. Because when I read the first sentence, I didn't expect the ending of those bubble dramas. Thank you LOSTA for writing such a beautiful article. I was really shocked after reading it.
Very good article, no one knows whether the second "I" is Naruto's illness or Sasuke's soul, but I think Sasuke, after all, the last sentence is, overstay, means to stay too long, and over\stay means to delay. Whether our feelings have been fermenting in your body for too long, or our love has been delayed for too long due to death and other colors, I think it is both. Naruto's chaos in the later period unfolds from the battlefield memories from Sasuke's perspective. There is obviously a lot of hustle and bustle, but it's like a tea plant blooming at the end of the stage. Like lacquerware that has been in disrepair for many years but remains as good as ever. The real passion is so vivid and vivid, like the last dance, so beautiful that it is paradoxically beautiful. It is clearly the dew love during war. Why do you spend your whole life together? Just because that love is too deep and too passionate. But in this treacherous and dirty world, there is no light at all. Finally, Naruto, go find his relics, whether it's him or you. After all, he is not a soldier, he is your lover - Sasuke/Naruto
Where are the archives of the locked articles? (;???Д??`) It's so sad to watch this