Official version:
Across the nine provinces, all living beings may become immortals.
Zhao Wangxu, the embodiment of Heaven's will, takes on a request from an old friend to find six new gods: Tianyu, Guchen, Qinghua, Ziwei, Changsheng, and Houtu.
After arriving in the human world, he gradually sees the effects of overflowing spiritual energy and uncovers the truth hidden behind the "transformed humans."
Can the world of the future still become a utopia?
Romance version:
Snow falls, reflected in the moonlit window; plum blossoms fall, staining the heart with blood.
On a winter night when he was fourteen, Ji Qiu came across a piece of smoky-purple Hetian jade. Among the red plum blossoms of Luoshu, its color seemed even deeper.
"Heartless one, will you become my disciple?"
He agreed, accepting Guchen's authority and acting in his place as a god.
"Master, I'll be good. You have to take me with you."
The rain beat against the eaves. Banana leaves bent and fell all around them. Beneath the faint candlelight, he unabashedly embraced his master with his gaze.
"Master, do you know what love is?"
The first time Zhao Wangxu saw Ji Qiu, he was small and thin, huddled timidly in a ball, his frostbitten hands bleeding without end.
He should have been a spirited young man, dressed in fine clothes and riding a fine horse. He shouldn't have been in such a wretched state.
Thinking this, Zhao Wangxu led him through the snow and found the heart that had been stolen from him within the palace walls.
Perhaps his heart had already ceased to be impartial by then.
"I like him, but in his eyes, there doesn't seem to be any difference between me and everyone else." That night, Ji Qiu got drunk with a friend and poured out his feelings.
Hidden nearby, Zhao Wangxu pressed a hand to his chest and leaned against the door. In silence, he mouthed, "I'm sorry," as tears streamed down his face.
There was a difference.
He forced down the strange feelings in his heart, but with every moment they spent together, they grew heavier, until he was utterly swayed.
In Jiexu City, Su Qingwang, a teacher just out of class, was stopped by someone.
"Master, come back with me."
"You've got the wrong person. I don't know you."
Cold, powerful, and beautiful shou x a devoted puppy-like gong who is foolish and clingy at first, then cool on the outside and warm-hearted later on
A few notes:
1. I'm a pure science student, and my writing isn't great. I have an outline, and if I can bring the story to life, it'll be a large ensemble cast. I'll do my best.
2. There are side couples. I'll write about them when they're relevant to the plot, but they won't get much attention.
3. The settings are a big mash-up, and I'm letting my imagination run wild. There are tons of original settings, so I hope you won't scrutinize them too closely.
4. This is my first time writing. Feedback is welcome, but the plot won't stray from the outline. I'll do a major revision after finishing, mainly to polish the wording, with few changes to the plot.
5. It's free. I'm writing for love, so come chat with me!
6. Six is a lucky number. Wishing myself smooth sailing and no writer's block.
Cultivation stages: Mortal Heart (9), Kind Heart (9), Clear Heart (3), Pure Heart (3), Saint's Heart (1), Heartless (1)
Theme: Keep your heart set on utopia.
"Every soul is a carrier of cause and effect, with strong bonds, paving the way in the past life, writing ink in this life, and writing in the future." I haven't finished reading it yet, but I've probably read about Chapter 6. The writing style is like that of a boy, the lines are clear and neat, the writing is very smooth, and the story has not yet unfolded. The so-called Heavenly Way needs to be entrusted by others to find six new gods to manage this world. Currently, the first Ji Qiu has been found and accepted as his disciple. Hmm... It looks like a master-disciple relationship. The setting of Xianxia is also very recognizable. Many children of aristocratic families appear in the opening scene. The descriptions of the three religions and nine streams are also good. The background structure is also clearly explained. The world view is clear, allowing me to directly immerse myself in the story. The characters are vivid, the way of heaven is just human, the human world is a little unreasonable, and it is stiff but has its own personality. The language is not bad, just like an old scholar, but readers can understand it. The author also thoughtfully translated the vernacular into "The author has something to say." The author is also a very cute person. The narrative style of the novel is very clean, with a clear and refreshing feeling, like the comfort of the northwest with high sky and clear clouds, without being muddy and sticky. I personally like this style very much. The emotional descriptions of the characters are also relatively in place. Ji Qiu acts cautiously, and Tiandao's distress when facing this child is already paving the way for the subsequent plot that has not yet unfolded. Since ancient times, the relationship between master and apprentice has always been a sad one. I don't know what stories these two will go through in the future and what ending they will lead to. I am still looking forward to it. After all, the setting of the two is very attractive. If the plot develops well, there will be a quite exciting story. The author also emphasized that he hopes it is a group portrait article, and hopes that everyone has his or her own main line and is no longer a tool. Current novels or film and television dramas are very thin. There is a time-traveling fairy tale drama. The heroine travels through the binding system and is asked to conquer the second male lead. After success, she returns to the original world. I think the story of several people along the way is relatively good. However, in the ending, the strategy is successful and the time-travel world completely collapses. Where do the supporting characters go? He Cong has no explanation at all, giving me a feeling of destruction and death. I really don't like this feeling. Life is so precious. Even the author should treat his characters well, from beginning to end. After all, it is a world created by the author, and maybe it is really people living in parallel time and space. It's emotional when talking about it, but for this article, the author's humanistic care is very good. I like the article very much, "Every soul is a carrier of cause and effect, with a strong bond, paving the way in the past life, writing in this life, and writing in the future." In this sentence, the author should cherish each individual character. The soul is where a person's subject is born, and it is the key to the success of shaping the character. I hope that the way of heaven is the way of heaven that the author hopes to be, and Ji Qiu is the Ji Qiu that the author hopes to be. There are some typos in the novel, which are unsightly, but they are not harmful. If you revise the article, it will be more rigorous. Creation is not easy. Every author has the story he wants to write. The fate of the characters is arranged. It is the projection of the author's thoughts and the practice of creating a world. I hope the author will persevere and bring this story to a beautiful end. What I want to say in the end is that I hope the author's writings can enrich the world and fill the world on paper. Use this refreshing and clean writing style to create a fairy world that you like.
Brother, you are so sincere and shameless
Qiqi, your writing is really, really beautiful.
Did two people choose each other's eyes? So cute [touch head]
Wu's mother's daily worries 😆
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The ignorant Xiaoqiu, the collapsed Master Zhao 😂
It turns out that a new chapter was added in the middle.
It should be Master, not Master 🌈
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