Double First Love|Two Strong Women Are Stronger|Daily Updates (The first volume is completed, the second volume is being updated)
The cool and domineering force of force attracts the girl city lord x the lively and talkative young hero with brain power and righteousness
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The Lord of Shiyou City, Yun Yao, stepped on the top master of the Demon Sect with just a few moves, transforming himself from a pitiful orphan girl who was questioned and pitied in the eyes of the world to a being that was feared by both good and evil.
Since then, Yun Yao's reputation for being ruthless and determined to retaliate has spread throughout the world at a young age.
However, just when everyone in the world was waiting to see how Yun Yao would take revenge on the enemies who had bullied her and Shi Youcheng when they were in danger, she suddenly started traveling south (Xinjiang) and north (border) with a sick and useless waste?
People who eat melons: Where did this pretty-faced vixen come from? Delay my queen's revenge and then dominate the world!
Lin: The rumored pretty face vixen: Is it possible that my Yaoyao just wants revenge and has no intention of taking over the mess in the world?
People who eat melon: If you don't refute, are you a pretty boy?
Yun·It is said that he is a foolish king whose lust makes him stupid. Yao: What do you refute? I just liked his face.
Lin Di, who had just helped Yun Yao break the conspiracy and challenge the best swordsman: Yao Yao, are you praising me for my good looks? (Pretending to be shy)
It's a story about the reunion of childhood sweethearts (acted by the female protagonist) after a long separation (the one the male protagonist shamelessly followed), and they work together to set up a scheme for revenge, and at the same time smash the conspiracy and save the whole world.
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The female protagonist has high martial arts and high IQ throughout the whole process, and in the later period, the martial arts is the best in the world; the male protagonist, except for the love brain, his brain is always online, and the second volume of the martial arts value is online
Plot flow, dual perspectives, set world view, high martial arts and ancient times
Main cp emotional line: no abuse, 1v1, double clean, he
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Reading guide:
1. The male protagonist's perspective is relatively heavy, especially in the early stage! The heroine appears in Chapter 6;
2. Non-main characters will have LGBT plot points, which are briefly mentioned to serve the plot.
Purpose: Growth and Protection
The martial arts style is quite difficult to write in Jinjiang, and the audience is not very large. I feel that the names given by the author are all of a good-looking type, but in fact, it is a little difficult to read, and the amount of information in one paragraph is too large and it is not explained clearly.
Then there is the naming aspect. Some of the nicknames and place names are a bit difficult to read, but they look good on the surface. But in fact, I didn't know where to break a sentence in a long paragraph. When reading a novel, you can read ten lines at a glance, and the amount of information you get is very small and you don't need to go back and read it again (this may also be the reason why some people are discouraged)
The last one is about paragraphing. There are too few paragraphs. It is recommended to divide a large paragraph into two or three paragraphs (not a Pomodoro style paragraph for one sentence). Only about two paragraphs on a page are a bit short, and it is quite tiring to read (the above are my little suggestions)
有一个脑洞,赫连渊有一天睡醒发现回到了老婆第一次去和亲的时候()
I don't understand a bit, so the heroine's father is Shen Jun? [Question mark]
The older generation is really wonderful
Yao Yao is a man of great skill and boldness
There must be something wrong with the Jun family, they are harming their own people.
Just confinement? ! Too cheap
Facing Yaoyao, everyone will become well-behaved
There are so many people and things are so complicated
The world is full of love, hate, and hatred. It's so exciting.
The uneasiness in Senior Brother's heart makes me very worried.
My brother is only 174! !
What the hell are the Four Books, illiterate and illiterate [covering face, laughing and crying]
明面要你摘花送月,私心想你送韶,果然不出所料送给了韶,韶心里满意告诉你可以继续学画,而且还可以叫名字,最后满扇子亲手画的桃花我觉得可以表达韶的心意了,真的很甜了。
The martial arts style is quite difficult to write in Jinjiang, and the audience is not very large. I feel that the names given by the author are all of a good-looking type, but in fact, it is a little difficult to read, and the amount of information in one paragraph is too large and it is not explained clearly. Then there is the naming aspect. Some of the nicknames and place names are a bit difficult to read, but they look good on the surface. But in fact, I didn't know where to break a sentence in a long paragraph. When reading a novel, you can read ten lines at a glance, and the amount of information you get is very small and you don't need to go back and read it again (this may also be the reason why some people are discouraged) The last one is about paragraphing. There are too few paragraphs. It is recommended to divide a large paragraph into two or three paragraphs (not a Pomodoro style paragraph for one sentence). Only about two paragraphs on a page are a bit short, and it is quite tiring to read (the above are my little suggestions)
有一个脑洞,赫连渊有一天睡醒发现回到了老婆第一次去和亲的时候()
I don't understand a bit, so the heroine's father is Shen Jun? [Question mark]
The older generation is really wonderful
Yao Yao is a man of great skill and boldness
There must be something wrong with the Jun family, they are harming their own people.
Just confinement? ! Too cheap
Facing Yaoyao, everyone will become well-behaved
There are so many people and things are so complicated
The world is full of love, hate, and hatred. It's so exciting.
The uneasiness in Senior Brother's heart makes me very worried.
My brother is only 174! !
What the hell are the Four Books, illiterate and illiterate [covering face, laughing and crying]
Who is Youer? Has he been out before?
"“咋回事情啊?"给作者大大捉个虫~多了个情