Interrogate in Time [Trash]

I feel that the attack is good and the nose is on the face, and the support is also very indulgent. If there is no arrow back in the early stage, this pace is a bit too fast. Moreover, the introduction said that after being abandoned in the middle of the attack, it will turn black. Why did he feel aggrieved? Even if he didn't follow the Gu family's instructions in the end, according to this setting, he got into Shou's side through Gu's arrangement. Even if he didn't betray him in the end, he concealed his identity and deceived Shou. For this reason, he should be severely punished. And I feel that Shou was not very naughty to him at the beginning. I feel wronged to such an extent that I don't have the consciousness of being a dog. I know it is a waste draft, but combined with the copy, if these problems in the text are not solved, I feel that Shou is very rushed. Even if Gong's identity has done nothing, his starting point is wrong, not to mention that he deceived Shou, so he deserves it no matter what Shou did to him. Even if Shou kicked him in the later stage, he has nothing to feel wronged about, no The crematorium really felt that Shou was confused and forgave Gong and suffered a lot. When it comes to suddenly discovering the problem, no matter how you look at it, Gong is sorry for Shou. He concealed the deception first and approached Shou with impure motives. Shou's attitude towards him at the beginning was also based on not knowing his identity, and he soon accepted his approach. Even if Shou didn't return the arrow, Gong's concealment was too much. This is a matter of principle. He should also be harsh on Crematorium in the later stage. It's funny to see that the word "abandonment" and "blackening" are used in the copywriting, as if the responsibility for the separation between the two is transferred to Shou. It's natural for him to be kicked first when he conceals it. Not only does he not reflect on his own problems, but he also feels wronged. It's very unreasonable. I know that his so-called "blackening" means washing his underwear with a cold face, but the fundamental problem is that he shouldn't have the idea of grievance in the first place. Why doesn't he reflect inwardly? As for his own problem, his thoughts of being abandoned were nothing more than resentment from the thought that he did not deserve to be treated like this. However, he did not feel guilty about hiding his identity at all. Instead, he felt aggrieved that he was too self-conscious and that he was too self-conscious and did not have the consciousness to be a dog. This problem was huge. If there was no crematorium to train dogs in the future, wouldn't it be even worse? . .

Just say why it feels so familiar, it turns out I've seen it before 🙏

Well written. Kiss this little baby 😚

The writing is very good... Youni's character design is very interesting... The baby, the eldest lady and the princess...