The Sword Immortal Prequel: A Fairy's Fateful Encounter

Tieguai Li had a daughter-in-law, but she did not follow him to heaven, because when the immortals took her there, she was afraid that there would not be enough food and meat in heaven, so she brought a bunch of things with her to go to heaven, but then she missed it.

Anyway, I can't write such a good article. If my comments offend you, just delete them and I won't have any other ideas. Hey-hey(???)

Your writing is a bit taxing on the reader's mind. You have to write a paragraph and then summarize and comment on the results of what just happened, so that the readers can understand the cause and effect and what happened. For example, after several contacts with Fu Kong, I discovered Fu Kong's many advantages. Step by step, I influenced the heroine bit by bit. First it is innocent and cute, then it is enlightened, and then it is persevering and unforgettable. This kind of summary and comment is also lyrical to stir up the reader's emotions, just like a primary school teacher giving a lecture, constantly recalling, summarizing, reviewing and commenting on the exam, and then scrolling to explain the cause and effect of the story, just like the original Taiwanese TV series, this way the article can be enriched. Compared with the current online articles, your articles are a little thinner in terms of sentences, and there are very few nuanced descriptions. They almost just keep going through the plot, and sometimes you don't have to read it in detail even if you want to.

Fatalism is no longer popular in online articles now. The protagonist should be more confident. He should not be confident at the beginning and then suddenly become unconfident at the end.

Guangguang "The boss was very surprised and said that more was needed. He flew back to Hangzhou with his sword again and bought silk. After doing this several times, he finally understood that doing business is so simple. You can make a profit by selling things from one place to another." This short paragraph can be written in three or four chapters in today's online articles...

Why is the ending of life re-opening determined? Ru Lan and Bu Kong must have gone to Lu Dongbin's cave to get married. The reason is that Ru Lan has lost her memory, has no system, and has no memory of her past life.

Chunyin Ruming is so unpopular,

Later Ru Lan gave birth to her and Fu Kong's child Qiu Lansheng, who was Xian Lingzi.

Very sad

Sadness surged into her heart like a turbulent wave. She couldn't believe that Kong was really dead. Could it be that his fate was just to get married to her? What would happen after they got married? Why can't two people stay together forever?