Dream of the Red Chamber Fanfiction: Welcoming Spring, Welcoming Fortune

The plot is really getting more and more erratic and I don't know why, but it still doesn't have that flavor anymore.

The writing is actually okay, but the ending is too rushed, and many things are not explained clearly. If you don't want to write about it later, don't mention it at the beginning. It's really sad, and I feel really uncomfortable watching it. I would have known better not to buy the VIP part. I suggest you not to read it.

Sweat, I haven't solved the thread buried in the previous chapter yet. It's anticlimactic...

It looks good, but it updates too slowly. . . . . . Too slow. . . .

Don't belittle yourself, in fact, if you don't apply the Red Mansions, it's still good as a story alone, so please give it a boost, author! Support! Throw flowers! !

The body is important~wait for fat~

Be sure to keep writing

V was made too early, the popularity has not been established, and the story is not deep enough.

Why do I feel like classmate Xiaoyu can't get help from Li Wan's father!

I don't agree with editing while writing. Although I correct typos and so on, I often lack the fluency of thinking.