Drunk on Pleasure

I have to say that Qinghua thought this was a "special" story at first, but after reading it, she was helplessly aware that it was just a "very twisted" story. When the author GN submitted the article, he said that this is a palace-fighting article that "does not fight the concubine but fights the emperor." However, this article has been updated to 30 chapters. The first 16 chapters are all in the countryside, describing the grassroots life of small households. It is a farming novel with a strong local flavor. The farming novel is also very good, and it is still relatively popular, but this is not a simple farming novel. After Chapter 17, the heroine enters the palace and begins her career in palace fighting. To sum it up helplessly: this is a farming-style writing method and a palace-fighting essay that grows from farming to the palace. Therefore, the problem is obvious-the awkward positioning has become the biggest failure of this article. Why? First, the ambiguous positioning is not pleasing to the reader. The reader's reading type has its own orientation. If you like farming, you will be pure farming. If you like palace fighting, you will be pure palace fighting. You can read both farming and palace fighting. Generally, you should choose the elements of these two types in different articles, and do not read these two elements in the same article. Secondly, for the author, combining elements of two genres with very different styles is a particularly test of his skills. What is grown in the fields? It is a small person, trivial, living a short life, having a short-lived family, and pays attention to slow cooking to bring out the flavor. What is Gong Doudou about? It is a big shot, a city government, who plays conspiracy, plays power, and pays attention to life and death to determine the world. Under such a premise, it is really difficult to maintain a relatively unified style and rhythm of writing. Therefore, although the setting of the legend of the grassroots imperial concubine is good, when writing, it is still necessary to emphasize between "grassroots" and "imperial concubine". This can not only maintain the contrast between "grassroots" and "imperial concubine", but also speed up the pace of writing appropriately. Speaking of which, I would like to complain about the title of the author GN. The title "Drunk and Greedy" is actually a bit more literary and artistic, but I don't know what it means. It would be better to just use "Legend of the Grassroots Emperor Concubine" to make it more appropriate and informative. (Of course, the complaints here are purely personal opinions. To increase click-through rate and avoid missing readers, the title of the article was made too straightforward, which may not be what the author wanted.) The positioning issue has been mentioned above, let's take a look at the specific content. In fact, some of the writings by GN, the author of Farming, are pretty good. The opening chapter describes the poor and backward feudal countryside. Although it does not deliberately describe the overall environment, through the dialogue of the characters and the arrangement of the plot, the ignorant feudal thoughts and the simple and bitter atmosphere have been completely outlined. The plot slowly unfolds since the imperial court selects a sacrificer to "light a sky lantern to make a sky drum". It is worth noting that this "sacrificial person" is used to "boil oil to light a sky lantern" and "peele a skin to make a sky drum". It is bloody, cruel, ignorant and sad, and it is impossible not to leave an impression on people. The next nearly 10 chapters describe the growth and interaction between the heroine and her childhood sweetheart. There is a question here, that is, what is the use of this male partner? If there is still a role for him in the later chapters, but he is mercilessly cannon fodder; if he is just a step for the heroine to enter the palace, then this foreshadowing is too lengthy, which leads to the premise that the plots of farming novels are generally slow, and the pace is slowed down a bit. The situation described by the author GN of "fighting the emperor without fighting the concubine" seems out of reach. No wonder some readers left a message saying: "It seems that this article is boundless..." Compared with the farming part, the palace fighting part was not written satisfactorily. First of all, it falls short in the rendering of the environment and atmosphere. It stands to reason that it would be better to describe the transition from extreme frugality to extreme luxury, but the description of the immediate environment after entering the palace is only a few sentences, and the main method of rendering is still "dialogue flow". In the farming part mentioned above, because the characters are vivid and unique, and the dialogue is very consistent with the atmosphere of the times and local characteristics at that time, although the environment and atmosphere are not directly exaggerated too much, the feeling is still there; in contrast, the environment in the palace battle part changes suddenly, there are many characters on the scene and they are more facial makeup, and there are a lot of soy sauce gangsters, and the dialogue content is not very nutritious, resulting in a chaotic atmosphere. Secondly, fighting everywhere makes fighting pointless. After the heroine entered the palace as a maid, it can be said that she was careful at every step and paid attention to every step. Everything anyone said seemed to have a special meaning, and there seemed to be evil intentions behind ordinary actions. Such a setting makes the key plots with "fighting points" become bland and lost to the public. For example, the handling of the first confrontation between the heroine and the emperor's eldest son was passed by in a blur, with no obvious emphasis, leaving no regrets. Originally, this was an excellent opportunity to describe the heroine's psychological adaptation process to palace fighting and the actual combat training process, but the heroine's performance was a bit weak. It was just "the posture and voice of greetings are more appropriate", and then "the position of kneeling in is more appropriate" and she survived a crisis simply. Perhaps the author GN would say that the eldest son of the emperor let her go for a reason, but it is okay to let her go, but the process could have been more complicated, twists and turns, and more exciting. Thirdly, the psychological changes of the heroine are very different, which leads to an imbalance in the scale of action. Before entering the palace, the heroine was in a pitiful situation. She was cautious and had a heavy sense of inferiority. However, after entering the palace, she only received a little training and became exquisite and good at dancing. Whether she was guessing her superiors' intentions or establishing her power to rule, she was able to do it with ease, but the change was too fast. The most important thing is that the deep-rooted feeling of inferiority has completely disappeared. The way he behaves has clearly surpassed that of a palace servant, and he seems to be like a master. The psychological journey of the heroine and the transitional processing in the middle are too weak. Taking the whole text into consideration, this kind of farming-style writing of palace battles is really too slow. The author GN once announced in the group that the male protagonist was released in Chapter 22. As a result, he was booed and said that "the face has not been seen". It is rare for the plot to be so slow. In this way, the focus of the story, the main line of the plot, the protagonist's JQ, the reveal of the suspense, and the cute point that the author GN said "do not fight the concubine to fight the emperor", when will it be fulfilled?

"The sword eyebrows are raised lightly, the phoenix eyes are slightly narrowed, and a smile from the corners of the lips bends straight into Zhi'er's heart, making her cheeks red and her eyes drunk." I like this sentence so much. I praise Da Da's exquisite writing style. The Crown Prince is playing a gangster, and as expected, he is in a unique position, and he can't even run away~~ He is young and rich, has a high position, speaks elegantly, and is a bit handsome. Yes, he is a weapon for picking up girls. Zhi'er can still retain his sobriety and does not have erotic dreams like other women. Haha, it is rare.

The writing style is distinctive, but the narrative is a bit cumbersome and not compact. It is difficult to have a sense of continuous picture when reading, which is tiring.

I feel that there is a big gap between the situation in the village and after entering the palace. Zhi'er in the village is always a bit petty and can't help but get angry at Huzi. After entering the palace, the psychological changes were not reflected. Suddenly, I had a general understanding of advancement and retreat, and I didn't feel that I was on the same branch.

"Look at how you look like a rabbit, but you were possessed by a nightmare when you were born? You are so cowardly. I just asked you to stay alone to serve, and you became such a virtuous person. If you had explicitly said that you would serve in bed, would you have really fainted?" This sentence made me feel a little excited~~haha. Comrade Zhi'er, I advise you to study psychology as soon as possible~~~~so you don't have to guess. Tea pet feels like the process of soaking tea in a purple clay pot. It is said that the longer the teapot is steeped, the more valuable it is.

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I finished reading Chapter 31 at three o'clock in the morning and am eagerly looking forward to His Majesty's update. Ouch~~~~~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Dear~~~~~~·Plop! (╯3╰) —( ⊙ O ⊙ )—What a great article! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ah haha

Phew... The emperor is becoming more and more like a mother~~ The branches are getting cuter and cuter =w= By the way, what is a tea pet? Please give me some knowledge~

Reading this article is like giving me a shot of blood. I haven't felt this way for a long time. I need to work harder. It is said that hard work is a virtue... But escape it

What a luxurious peach blossom forest! What an ironic black wood oil! Your Majesty, your plot is great! The little bit of black wood oil that was worth the price of our three daughters was just squandered by the nobles in the palace! ! Looking forward to the night chat