Writing practice. Don't read, don't read. There are lots and lots and lots of things to criticize.
[Cool, flirtatious guqin maker heroine x scheming, theatrical brocade-clad guard hero]
(Both virgins)
Ge Qingyuan is the youngest guqin maker in Tongxi Town, Jiangsu Prefecture. Using her family’s time-honored craft, she has made a thriving business of her workshop.
One day, a down-and-out scholar comes to town, saying he wants to work and learn to play the guqin? She’s never heard of an employee like that!
Fine, he doesn’t want wages, only to learn the guqin. But he can’t even tell the notes apart?!
Ge Qingyuan keeps working away with her plane, day and night...
A few days after the scholar runs away from home, his stepmother, Madam Pang, comes to Ge Qingyuan’s door and pressures her to marry the eldest son of the Xu family’s cloth shop. Just as the two sides reach a stalemate, the scholar returns...
“A Yuan, don’t you want me anymore?”
What does he mean? He left and came back saying something like that? Still, the scholar is rather handsome. She might as well use him to drive Madam Pang away, then dump him afterward.
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“You left. Why are you back?”
The scholar sees that Qingyuan really seems angry. As she turns to pick up her plane, he grabs her sleeve, gives it a gentle tug, and apologizes.
“A Yuan, I’m only a poor scholar. Without you, I can’t survive out there.”
“Oh? Can’t you find a kind employer anywhere? I don’t even pay you here.” Qingyuan can’t help laughing.
“But without you, A Yuan...”
Theme: Devotion to family and country, and the craft of artisanship
After reading three chapters immersively, I think it's okay. I don't usually like to read electronic novels, but I watch a lot of TV dramas. The plot of this work is comfortable to read, the characters are clearly portrayed, and the character settings are novel. I haven't seen the background of the story yet. What is the main plot? Maybe it has something to do with the power struggle in the palace (blind guess) 🤔. My suggestion is that there are many typos in the book, so don't be too anxious when typing later. Of course, this will not affect your viewing. (Personal feeling, because I have seen similar plots) There are also some plot scenes that are a bit monotonous and embarrassing when imagined. The language description of emotional drama can be beautiful and moving, allowing readers to feel the emotions of the characters... Because he is a new author, there are many remarkable things. For a drama fan with rich "experience" and a love for watching dramas, this author's novels have the temperament of screen TV dramas without losing their own unique style. Keep up the good work and look forward to your better works!
The writing is really good. Can you update two chapters a day? This is not enough.
Xiao Ge also has a perfect ending! The teacher can finish it, which is already better than many others
It's finally finished 🥺 I feel like a lot of the content in the last chapter was just mentioned in one stroke. Hug teacher, newbies take their time like this. 💪 I'm looking forward to the teacher's new article!
The ending was so sudden. [Hold your chin] Come on, look forward to the next work.
Going to the capital ~ A new map has been opened 🧋
It's so early today! (PS: The fourth page of Baby's chapter is densely packed with words 🥺, should you consider dividing it into paragraphs)
Why stop here! Update soon. Update soon. I want to see the following content 🧋
What a great girl, let's pursue a career like this 💪 💪
I like a sober and rational heroine. The most important thing is to have a career 🧋